~We've Weathered Storms...~
For my beautiful wife, Keresna, on our anniversary.99 total reviews
Comment from Lulube
What a wonderful, wonderful, tribute to your Wife. A very heartfelt writing in perfect rhyming. Your wife should be proud of your words that you have shared with the world.
good job Dean
lulube
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What a wonderful, wonderful, tribute to your Wife. A very heartfelt writing in perfect rhyming. Your wife should be proud of your words that you have shared with the world.
good job Dean
lulube
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from Selina Stambi
Well, well (she said, with sweet sighs of satisfaction!) - this poem is entirely my cup of tea, Dean.
Besides that, the metre is flawless - the lines flow smoothly with ne'er a contrived hiccup.
Happy anniversary Keresna and Dean. Here's to many, many more happy years together.
God bless you both and take you from strength to strength.
Sonali
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Well, well (she said, with sweet sighs of satisfaction!) - this poem is entirely my cup of tea, Dean.
Besides that, the metre is flawless - the lines flow smoothly with ne'er a contrived hiccup.
Happy anniversary Keresna and Dean. Here's to many, many more happy years together.
God bless you both and take you from strength to strength.
Sonali
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from ArtGal
Dean, what a romantic you are, and I'll bet your beautiful wife Keresna, shed a few tears reading this. I'm sure that you're a very lucky man also to have her. BTW, what a beautiful name that I've never heard before. Every marriage has it's good and bad, ups and downs, but when there's true love, we manage to survive and be even stronger in our love. Happy Anniversary to you both. . .Sharon
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Dean, what a romantic you are, and I'll bet your beautiful wife Keresna, shed a few tears reading this. I'm sure that you're a very lucky man also to have her. BTW, what a beautiful name that I've never heard before. Every marriage has it's good and bad, ups and downs, but when there's true love, we manage to survive and be even stronger in our love. Happy Anniversary to you both. . .Sharon
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from Drew Delaney
This is so, so beautiful, Dean. What a romantic you are and I love the song and picture you used to help convey your love to your wife. How blessed you both are to have each other. Happy Anniversary, friends!
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This is so, so beautiful, Dean. What a romantic you are and I love the song and picture you used to help convey your love to your wife. How blessed you both are to have each other. Happy Anniversary, friends!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from krys123
Dean;
The song in the background is very appropriate and it is one of my favorite songs from the Titanic. The picture of the raindrops is also very complementary to your writing pretty much everything else is also. And I also loved the picture of your wife.
You could do or full of imagery that you were in this beautiful love poem with great descriptive and expressive imagery that is so vividly sound and very special.
Happy anniversary my friend and thank you so much for sharing and posting and may the sun always shine on both of your shoulders.
Alex
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Dean;
The song in the background is very appropriate and it is one of my favorite songs from the Titanic. The picture of the raindrops is also very complementary to your writing pretty much everything else is also. And I also loved the picture of your wife.
You could do or full of imagery that you were in this beautiful love poem with great descriptive and expressive imagery that is so vividly sound and very special.
Happy anniversary my friend and thank you so much for sharing and posting and may the sun always shine on both of your shoulders.
Alex
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Dean - this is beautiful and so powerfully expressed both your poem and your author notes. That declaration made me tear up.
So great writing and may you both always feel that love...
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
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Dear Dean - this is beautiful and so powerfully expressed both your poem and your author notes. That declaration made me tear up.
So great writing and may you both always feel that love...
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from His Grayness
Dean: this is absolutely splendid, sensitive, powerful, honest, honorable, passionate, yet very classy! Congratulations to Keresna for earning such deep love and congratulations to you for celebrating it so beautifully! Vance
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Dean: this is absolutely splendid, sensitive, powerful, honest, honorable, passionate, yet very classy! Congratulations to Keresna for earning such deep love and congratulations to you for celebrating it so beautifully! Vance
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
ABSOLUTELY LOVELY. IN THESE DAYS WHEN MARRIAGES ARE STRUGGLING TO HIT THE 5TH ANNIVERSARY,THIS IS REALLY AN INSPIRATION TO US ALL. VERY WELL WRITTEN. WELL DONE!
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ABSOLUTELY LOVELY. IN THESE DAYS WHEN MARRIAGES ARE STRUGGLING TO HIT THE 5TH ANNIVERSARY,THIS IS REALLY AN INSPIRATION TO US ALL. VERY WELL WRITTEN. WELL DONE!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from madhatter1977
Dean, you are a lucky and talented man! Not sure if this is your normal type of music or poem but it's really great and the poem flows beautifully in every line, singing of your love! Best wishes, Pete
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Dean, you are a lucky and talented man! Not sure if this is your normal type of music or poem but it's really great and the poem flows beautifully in every line, singing of your love! Best wishes, Pete
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
Comment from DALLAS01
Kudos to you Dean for sharing this heartfelt tribute, and the same to her for being the kind of woman who can elicit such praise. Thanks for sharing.
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Kudos to you Dean for sharing this heartfelt tribute, and the same to her for being the kind of woman who can elicit such praise. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
