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Comment from donette1914
Outstanding in every way and you wrote this so heartfelt of what poetry means to me and i felt you have a wonderful chance to win well done
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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Outstanding in every way and you wrote this so heartfelt of what poetry means to me and i felt you have a wonderful chance to win well done
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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sure hope so LOL! thank you don :)
Comment from Janet Foor
You said all the things we poets want to say. It does make each person see things in different ways as we see reflected in the reviews we read.
Very well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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You said all the things we poets want to say. It does make each person see things in different ways as we see reflected in the reviews we read.
Very well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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thank you janet :-)
Comment from Tatarka2
This is a lovely poem. The reason for the 4 is that it just didn't seem to flow well for me, lyrically, whether I read it silently or aloud (& I tried several times). Some of the lines seem to long (i.e, "poetry means to everyone something different") and a bit unwieldy, while some (i.e., the very next line) just don't seem to make sense or cohere with the poem.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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This is a lovely poem. The reason for the 4 is that it just didn't seem to flow well for me, lyrically, whether I read it silently or aloud (& I tried several times). Some of the lines seem to long (i.e, "poetry means to everyone something different") and a bit unwieldy, while some (i.e., the very next line) just don't seem to make sense or cohere with the poem.
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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hmm interesting points. will definitely take another look! thank you tatar :)
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tweaked it a bit :)
Comment from Petriesan
good telling of what this form of expression means to you, and, I Suppose, why you do it.
I like how you talk about the form itself
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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good telling of what this form of expression means to you, and, I Suppose, why you do it.
I like how you talk about the form itself
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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thank you petrie :)
Comment from Joy Graham
This is a lovely entry for this contest, shelley kaye :) you summed it all nicely with your closing couplet. I nodded in agreement as I read this poem on what poetry means to you. Good luck to you in this contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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This is a lovely entry for this contest, shelley kaye :) you summed it all nicely with your closing couplet. I nodded in agreement as I read this poem on what poetry means to you. Good luck to you in this contest.
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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thank you joy :)
Comment from Kingsland
You've really gone and done it now shelley. You've written a poem that just makes me smile and be glad that I'm a poet. This was just an outstanding piece of poetic artistry. I liked everything about this poem. It was very creative about the way poets think and write. I really enjoyed reading every word of this outstanding piece of poetic artistry... John
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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You've really gone and done it now shelley. You've written a poem that just makes me smile and be glad that I'm a poet. This was just an outstanding piece of poetic artistry. I liked everything about this poem. It was very creative about the way poets think and write. I really enjoyed reading every word of this outstanding piece of poetic artistry... John
Comment Written 16-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2014
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WOW! :-) a sixer :-) i know you don't give out to many of those - i honoured!! thank you so much, john!! :-D
