A Book of Songs
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Barbers Refrain (Part 1)"Metre ... Ballads & Slant Rhyme
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Comment from Cheryl Daphine
It hangs the same in America. An old tradition. A profession I would not envy. You so aptly spoke in their behalf,in this well written poem. Flowed well and said a mouthful, lets hope it was not hair.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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It hangs the same in America. An old tradition. A profession I would not envy. You so aptly spoke in their behalf,in this well written poem. Flowed well and said a mouthful, lets hope it was not hair.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Excellent, many thanks.
Comment from Tonulak
This was a riviting read of the history of that now overlooked tradition of the medival barber as a healer. The repeated refrain was haunting and worked really well in this context. An excellent poem full of local color...red and white:)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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This was a riviting read of the history of that now overlooked tradition of the medival barber as a healer. The repeated refrain was haunting and worked really well in this context. An excellent poem full of local color...red and white:)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Excellent, many thanks.
Comment from phild
Very good writing which drew several chuckles from me. It also brought back many memories of years gone by. I thought the last line was excellent "Feel the scissor and comb's healing balm." I look forward to part 2.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Very good writing which drew several chuckles from me. It also brought back many memories of years gone by. I thought the last line was excellent "Feel the scissor and comb's healing balm." I look forward to part 2.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Glad to know you could appreciate it...lol.
Comment from The Stranger
WELL I didnt realise that you knew my barber so well..lol!
this is a very funny poem and you are correct, there are still many poles out there
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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WELL I didnt realise that you knew my barber so well..lol!
this is a very funny poem and you are correct, there are still many poles out there
Comment Written 19-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Excellent, long may they continue.
Comment from PoetlikePoe
wow...if i had a 6 star i would give it to you. this is simply on a whole different level to how i write. i'm not sure i could ever get a message or picture displayed so perfectly. this is amazing work.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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wow...if i had a 6 star i would give it to you. this is simply on a whole different level to how i write. i'm not sure i could ever get a message or picture displayed so perfectly. this is amazing work.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Excellent, glad you enjoyed.
Comment from words
I enjoyed your informative write on the origination of barbers.
I certainly did not know:Did you know it started with bandages and blood,
In the day, we were the first on hand.
Blood letting and cures were the aim of the brave few,
Our fame of skill travelled the land.
Sharp instruments for medical use work day and night,
Tough gristle, a backbone sharp keeps calm.
Looking forward to part two.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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I enjoyed your informative write on the origination of barbers.
I certainly did not know:Did you know it started with bandages and blood,
In the day, we were the first on hand.
Blood letting and cures were the aim of the brave few,
Our fame of skill travelled the land.
Sharp instruments for medical use work day and night,
Tough gristle, a backbone sharp keeps calm.
Looking forward to part two.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Some time in the future...keep your eyes peeled, I think you`ll enjoy. Also a part three to conclude the story.
Comment from volunteer angel
That red and white pole will always be a symbol to me of the Barbershop, though it's hardly seen anymore. Your first paragraph told a grissly story of how this started. The picture was really cute and set off the poem. Great job! V.A.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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That red and white pole will always be a symbol to me of the Barbershop, though it's hardly seen anymore. Your first paragraph told a grissly story of how this started. The picture was really cute and set off the poem. Great job! V.A.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Matoshka
Loved your picture, does he need a trim? LOL I loved how this felt, so old time. the barber did use to be the ones that fixed people up, plus the hair cuts. this was wonderful and I enjoyed it very much. Hail the Barber! Blessings
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Loved your picture, does he need a trim? LOL I loved how this felt, so old time. the barber did use to be the ones that fixed people up, plus the hair cuts. this was wonderful and I enjoyed it very much. Hail the Barber! Blessings
Comment Written 19-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Many thanks...
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Your very welcome, Blessings
Comment from livelylinda
Bic,
I liked this! In America, we use to have red/white/blue barber poles which hung outside the door to the barber shops and the red/white/blue swirl use to go 'round and 'round. One shop I remember, even had a cigar store indian standing next to the barber pole. . .what I would give to own both of those items!
I think that to women, a barber shop is a secretive man place. But, my grandfather use to take me with him to his barber shop so I guess I was lucky and became accustomed to the smells, sounds and conversation that live within.
Good writing.
livelylinda
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Bic,
I liked this! In America, we use to have red/white/blue barber poles which hung outside the door to the barber shops and the red/white/blue swirl use to go 'round and 'round. One shop I remember, even had a cigar store indian standing next to the barber pole. . .what I would give to own both of those items!
I think that to women, a barber shop is a secretive man place. But, my grandfather use to take me with him to his barber shop so I guess I was lucky and became accustomed to the smells, sounds and conversation that live within.
Good writing.
livelylinda
Comment Written 19-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Excellent,...not quite sure what the blue would stand for.lol.
Comment from HPicasso
This is a marvelous poem and I enjoyed reading very much, This poem has great potential, very well written, dedicated to the barbers over the years. I remember those days when a barber shop was a real barber shop. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Congratulation!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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This is a marvelous poem and I enjoyed reading very much, This poem has great potential, very well written, dedicated to the barbers over the years. I remember those days when a barber shop was a real barber shop. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Congratulation!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
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Excellent H. I hope parts 2 and 3 dont disapoint...lol.
