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Harley, a Little Dog

Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Harley's First Snow"
Life and Times of a Jack Russell Terrier

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Comment from Realist101
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HI Patty! And Harley too!! Hugs to you both...your story is so well done, I could find no spaggies...and what a fun relationship! Pups are just like kids! He will be your friend for all of his life Patty. I had a rat terrier and she was a doll. Her name was Sandy...I miss her too. Keep up the good work!! ") Susan

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2011
    Thank you so much for reading the latest of the Harley saga. Writing these little adventures is a nice break from case studies and all of the reading for school. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~patty~
Comment from sweetsilversong
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Sounds like Harley had fun playing in the snow, Patty.
I love the way you describe his first steps on the weird white stuff.
Best wishes.

SSS

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2011
    Thank you so much for reading the latest of the Harley saga. Writing these little adventures is a nice break from case studies and all of the reading for school. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~patty~
Comment from juliaSjames
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I enjoyed reading, not only about the snow adventure, but also about the mutually beneficial regime to which you have introduced Harley.

It was very funny to watch my tropical cat, Oliver, experience snow for the first time. Actually he adapted very quickly. But it was too cold for him to stay out long.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2011
    Thank you so much for reading the latest of the Harley saga. Writing these little adventures is a nice break from case studies and all of the reading for school. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~patty~
Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi Patty,

My little dog lived in Texas for the first two years of her life. The first time she saw snow she jumped back from the door and looked at me as if to say...what in blazes is that and do you really expect me to go outside? It was so funny. I love these Harley stories and this one captured me immediately. I hope he gets use to the snow. Well done. Blessings, chey

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2011
    Thank you so much for continuing to read Harley's saga. He is sitting next to me, 'reading' over my shoulder as I catalog the reviews. He sends puppy kisses your way! ~patty~
Comment from bowls
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Another lovely chapter of Harley's life. I loved sharing his experience with his first snowfall. What a great expression: "Harley felt his tummy's gladness." I can't think of a better way of expressing it. Once again, thanks for sharing. Please give Harley a hug for me.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2011
    Thank you so much for continuing to read Harley's saga. He is sitting next to me, 'reading' over my shoulder as I catalog the reviews. He sends puppy kisses your way! ~patty~
Comment from N.K. Wagner
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This is great, Patty. I forgot how hard cold weather is on little dogs. Does he have a sweater? I have German Shepherds, and they live for the snow, but they have (hair) coats an inch thick. It's good to hear that Harley's settled in so well. :) Nancy

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2011
    Thank you so much for continuing to read Harley's saga. He is sitting next to me, 'reading' over my shoulder as I catalog the reviews. He sends puppy kisses your way! ~patty~
reply by N.K. Wagner on 04-Mar-2011
    You may give him a big kiss on the lips for me (I love puppy kisses!). Nancy
Comment from JW
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This was another cute Harley story and I could easily picture all the actions taking place within my mind's eye. Good job. While reading this, I could not help but think about my dog, Peedy, and how he always tries to eat as much of the snow as possible.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2011
    Thank you so much for continuing to read Harley's saga. He is sitting next to me, 'reading' over my shoulder as I catalog the reviews. He sends puppy kisses your way! ~patty~
Comment from MizKat
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Patty - This is such a cute and touching story. I really enjoyed reading it and learning about you precious little dog, Harley. Kat

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2011
    Thank you so much for continuing to read Harley's saga. He is sitting next to me, 'reading' over my shoulder as I catalog the reviews. He sends puppy kisses your way! ~patty~
Comment from L.lora
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Patty this was great. YOur
point of view is always refreshing
and so exciting. Your descriptions
are great as is the flow of your
story. A most enjoyable read, no
nits or spags. Lora

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2011
    Thank you so much for continuing to read Harley's saga. He is sitting next to me, 'reading' over my shoulder as I catalog the reviews. He sends puppy kisses your way! ~patty~
Comment from pickthorn
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A very well crafted story about Harley the dog who has experienced his first romp in the snow. You have created a real life like image of Harley and your love for this funny little creature.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 04-Mar-2011
    Thank you so much for continuing to read Harley's saga. He is sitting next to me, 'reading' over my shoulder as I catalog the reviews. He sends puppy kisses your way! ~patty~