Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Biting is not allowed. This is a well written poem with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. I wish Harley and his new family a Happy New Year.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2010

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate the stars, and your words always bring a smile to my face. Happy New Year to you, too! ~patty~

reply by c_lucas on 31-Dec-2010

You're welcome, Patty. Charlie

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Good

I agree there is nothing more special than a puppy. They are a life changes experience, but grow up to life long loyal friend. I enjoyed your poem.

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 Comment Written 31-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2010

Thank you SO much for reading and the generous review. I hope you are feeling good today -- obviously you are if you are reviewing. Have a wondrous New Year's. ~patty~

Comment from missy98writer

Excellent

Mustangpatty1029,
your poem is very well written and rich in imagery painting a picture in the reader head. Adorable art work. Your rhyme is excellent with great descriptive writing and very good narrative. I enjoyed the third stanza the best: "With Harley in the house Nothing is the same For me or my spouse No one to blame." Thanks for sharing your cute poem and dog. Have a great New Year.
Melissa.

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 Comment Written 31-Dec-2010

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2010

Thank you SO much Melissa for reading and your generous review. Poetry is SO hard for me!! However, I wanted to write about the feelings swirling in my head right now -- having Harley in my life is awesome! Happy New Year to you and yours! ~patty~