Woodland Secrets Part Two
fantasy ottava rima - see author's notes90 total reviews
Comment from Peter@Poole
Superb, Brooke, and quite and undertaking. Interesting to note that you have an eye for fairy fashions and have dressed them with your own designs! If I gave you two thousand dollars to doll up, how would you appear?
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Superb, Brooke, and quite and undertaking. Interesting to note that you have an eye for fairy fashions and have dressed them with your own designs! If I gave you two thousand dollars to doll up, how would you appear?
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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I think the most expensive outfit I've ever worn cost $200, and that was a rarity! I'm not a lace and pearls type :-)
Thank you for your wonderful review :-) Brooke
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I knew you'd say something like that. Bless you.
Comment from RapturedHeart
Ah, Brooke. Such lovely sentiments. Where in the world can we find a man like that??? Love the way you put words together--bride in buttermilk--delicious! Enjoying this little series and am heading over to the next one:). Thanks for sharing this with us, and take care,
Heather
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Ah, Brooke. Such lovely sentiments. Where in the world can we find a man like that??? Love the way you put words together--bride in buttermilk--delicious! Enjoying this little series and am heading over to the next one:). Thanks for sharing this with us, and take care,
Heather
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Thank you, Heather. If I knew where to find a man like that, I'd keep it to myself until I had first pick at least! LOL Brooke
Comment from pixiemillie
What a marvelous celebration you have described here, Brooke. Makes one feel like they are there and observing the beauty of this happy day.
... but none outshone the bride in buttermilk,
organza lace and pearls upon her dress.
The groom stood proud, his crown of saffron gilt,
a stately king who could not but impress,
Wherever do you find the words ... they are so well placed and flow perfectly.
The ending ... those times when we are caught in the moment and the outer world is forgotten and those horrific wars- -would that all would simply lay down their arms and 'join in the celebration'.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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What a marvelous celebration you have described here, Brooke. Makes one feel like they are there and observing the beauty of this happy day.
... but none outshone the bride in buttermilk,
organza lace and pearls upon her dress.
The groom stood proud, his crown of saffron gilt,
a stately king who could not but impress,
Wherever do you find the words ... they are so well placed and flow perfectly.
The ending ... those times when we are caught in the moment and the outer world is forgotten and those horrific wars- -would that all would simply lay down their arms and 'join in the celebration'.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Rose of Sharon, I am so pleased with your response to this poem. I just posted part three, much to my relief! LOL Thank you for your kind encouragement :-) Brooke
Comment from perunest
This is such a lovely, idyllic setting;
your words hold beauty, serenity and
love. This wonderful offering, with its
ethereal mood evokes such peace - I can't
wait for the third part! Carolyn
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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This is such a lovely, idyllic setting;
your words hold beauty, serenity and
love. This wonderful offering, with its
ethereal mood evokes such peace - I can't
wait for the third part! Carolyn
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Carolyn, thank you. I just posted Part Three - so your wish is my command! LOL Brooke
Comment from dportwood
I give high praise for your originality, creativity, language, and wording in each poetic style you pursue. Rhyming and meter requirements always fulfilled. Well done.
Duane
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I give high praise for your originality, creativity, language, and wording in each poetic style you pursue. Rhyming and meter requirements always fulfilled. Well done.
Duane
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Thank you, Duane, and good morning! :-) Brooke
Comment from Adri7enne
I am so enjoying this glimpse into your fertile imagination! Your bride and groom are positively delightful. I love your fantasy poetry, Brooke.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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I am so enjoying this glimpse into your fertile imagination! Your bride and groom are positively delightful. I love your fantasy poetry, Brooke.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Adrienne, thank you. So glad you are enjoying - I have to get that imagination fertile again to write part three later today! :-) Brooke
Comment from honeytree
I loved reading what I had read, and really enjoy this writer's work, as with all of her work. These words are truly very creative and written so well.The art work is superb and the presentation is really wonderful
The words written are very touching, and telling.Love was also very special within these words.
I loved every word written.
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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I loved reading what I had read, and really enjoy this writer's work, as with all of her work. These words are truly very creative and written so well.The art work is superb and the presentation is really wonderful
The words written are very touching, and telling.Love was also very special within these words.
I loved every word written.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Thank you, Annie. You are most thoughtful. Brooke :-)
Comment from BethShelby
This little wedding of the fairies is delightful. I can imagine this handsome king marrying his little fairy princess dressed in buttermilk organza lace adorned with pearls. How lovely.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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This little wedding of the fairies is delightful. I can imagine this handsome king marrying his little fairy princess dressed in buttermilk organza lace adorned with pearls. How lovely.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Thank you, Beth. Your comments made me smile :-) Brooke
Comment from Joyce L.
Well Brooke, after reading the first, I just had to read the middle. I am looking forward to reading the finish of this make believe. It was enjoyable.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Well Brooke, after reading the first, I just had to read the middle. I am looking forward to reading the finish of this make believe. It was enjoyable.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Thanks, Joyce - I appreciate your comments :-) Brooke
Comment from words
Ah, if only marriage and joy could actually bring this about in the world that we inhabit:
no predators nor prey this day of peace,
as all, of one accord, sought war's surcease.
An interesting format. I assume you would this is meant to be read as one longer piece.
A mini-epic? As it is about faerie creatures...that is quite apropos .
Charming.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Ah, if only marriage and joy could actually bring this about in the world that we inhabit:
no predators nor prey this day of peace,
as all, of one accord, sought war's surcease.
An interesting format. I assume you would this is meant to be read as one longer piece.
A mini-epic? As it is about faerie creatures...that is quite apropos .
Charming.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2009
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Yes, the three parts will be meant to be read as one longer poem - I'm just posting it in three parts because I'm writing it as I post and it takes a long time to do each verse. Thanks, my friend. Brooke
