Tonight
Time draws near...50 total reviews
Comment from Poetofheart2013
A very beautiful and graceful poem.
Full of thoughts and
Feeling of love and
Compassion and caring.
I know what feels like
to see someone you
love go though that.
I really enjoyed reading
It. Keep up good
Work!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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A very beautiful and graceful poem.
Full of thoughts and
Feeling of love and
Compassion and caring.
I know what feels like
to see someone you
love go though that.
I really enjoyed reading
It. Keep up good
Work!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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thanks so much sweetie...
Comment from amahra
First, I'd like to say that the artwork you chose for your writing is certainly stunning. The rainbow colors are beautiful. our Your Rhyming That 1-6-1 poem is lovely and well crafted.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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First, I'd like to say that the artwork you chose for your writing is certainly stunning. The rainbow colors are beautiful. our Your Rhyming That 1-6-1 poem is lovely and well crafted.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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thanks so my amahra... I really appreciate the five glitter stars...
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thank you for sharing
the notes and poem.
-I am sorry about your
husband's father.
-You wrote a good poem for him.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the imagery and rhyme.
-I like the peaceful tone of
your poem, too.
-It sounds like that's how your
father-in-law is feeling.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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-Thank you for sharing
the notes and poem.
-I am sorry about your
husband's father.
-You wrote a good poem for him.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the imagery and rhyme.
-I like the peaceful tone of
your poem, too.
-It sounds like that's how your
father-in-law is feeling.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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We are doing everything we possibly do to be there for him... thanks so much for the stars.
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You are very welcome for the stars and review. I am sure you are, and he appreciates it, too.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
I love this entry. Very beautiful presentation. Beautiful heavenly look photo to compliment your words as well. So nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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I love this entry. Very beautiful presentation. Beautiful heavenly look photo to compliment your words as well. So nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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thanks so much for your wishes and the stars Joanne...
Comment from Hitcher
That is such a special thing to be able to do. To care for them a loved one and be there to make there passing as pleasant and comfortable as possible. We did it for my wife's father and she adored that time with him. Well done and good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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That is such a special thing to be able to do. To care for them a loved one and be there to make there passing as pleasant and comfortable as possible. We did it for my wife's father and she adored that time with him. Well done and good luck!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Hitcher... It is... What a journey it has been... thanks for the review.
Comment from Nancy s
Beautiful work! I think there can be many interpretations of this poem. I interpreted it as change through the eyes of those around an aging person. It can be difficult and painful, yet there is beauty in it as well.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Beautiful work! I think there can be many interpretations of this poem. I interpreted it as change through the eyes of those around an aging person. It can be difficult and painful, yet there is beauty in it as well.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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I never thought about that... you are right and I love that... thanks for pointing it out...
Comment from Paul McFarland
Good effort for a very difficult prompt. You have thrown in some rhyme which I always appreciate. I think this should do fairly well in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Good effort for a very difficult prompt. You have thrown in some rhyme which I always appreciate. I think this should do fairly well in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thanks for stopping by to review...
Comment from Pangalactic
Although this piece is about death ( I'm assuming) it has a peaceful gentle tone, making the voyage to the other side seem like one to not be afraid of, like our loved ones are in good hands.
I hope all goes well for you - much love
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Although this piece is about death ( I'm assuming) it has a peaceful gentle tone, making the voyage to the other side seem like one to not be afraid of, like our loved ones are in good hands.
I hope all goes well for you - much love
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Definitely in good hands... thanks for the thoughtful review Trask...
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Tonight, has the right set up and marks the time when the long and winding road has come to the final destination. We are sad and glad for this dad.
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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This 1-6-1, Tonight, has the right set up and marks the time when the long and winding road has come to the final destination. We are sad and glad for this dad.
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thanks for this poignant review Bill... Much appreciated.
Comment from Eternal Muse
I loved that piece! Great imagery and visuals, rhyming and artistic presentation.
A nice artwork which compliments the piece.
Bet of luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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I loved that piece! Great imagery and visuals, rhyming and artistic presentation.
A nice artwork which compliments the piece.
Bet of luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2021
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Thanks ever so Eternal Muse... much appreciated.
