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Into the Quiet

Six Word Poem: Imagine the possibilities...

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Comment from Lana Marie
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Into The Quiet is a good 6 word entry for this contest. There's a lot said in the 6 words that you chose. It's so true that connection is built between two people when they can share freely without condemnation. Nice work.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

Comment from Jesse James Doty
Exceptional
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This is an outstanding six-word poem! I love the choices of words and phrases, it evokes a sense of the subtleties that enrich our relationship and those around us! I feel like I know you well, and you know me, too and that makes for a wonderful friendship!
Thank you for being my friend!
Have a great Sunday,
Jesse

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
    Good Morning, Jesse!
    First of all, are you feeling better? I surely hope so!
    I was prompted to write this small offering after viewing a number of newscasts and reading articles where individuals' shared thoughts were met with condemnation. So many people refuse to "listen" as they are so eager to plan what they are going to say next that they don't "hear" what the speaker is saying! Despite differences, "imagine the possibilities" if we all took a moment to listen and connect with one another...
    Thank you for your exceptional rating and thoughtful review.
    Hoping your week ahead is a wonderful one!

    Thank you!
    diane
reply by Jesse James Doty on 26-Sep-2021
    Good morning, Diane!
    First of all, I agree with what you wrote in your reply and second, yes I am feeling somewhat better. I still am not out of the woods yet. I still have to add slowly, each food group and decide which ones work and which ones don't yet. I am still drinking supplemental ensure protein drinks which add needed nutrition, calories, and added protein, of course.
    You're very welcome for the review, my friend. I wanted to ask you something...what does Recognized Reviewer notification mean? I received one yesterday, did everyone in Fan Story get one?
    Have a great upcoming week!
    Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
    So pleased to know that you are feeling better, Jesse!
    My husband and I are down with nasty colds - compliments of our little grandson! Goodness! :)
    I also rec'd "Recognized Reviewer." I don't know what that means! I just wish I could find the time to review all that I would love to review! :)

    Take Care!
    diane
reply by Jesse James Doty on 26-Sep-2021
    Hello, Diane.
    Thanks! I am not out of the woods yet but improving each day that comes along! I am so sorry the two of you are sick with terrible colds!
    Kids get everything! Thanks for answering the question. I guess we'll find out more as the day moves ahead!
    Take care and get well!
    Jesse
Comment from Mary Shifman
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This is a very nice poem with a positive message. One should never discount the importance of finding someone with whom they can share their musings and know that they can do so safely. I have one friend with whom I can share anything and the bond strengthens each time we share our thoughts, ideas, hopes and fears. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This 6 Word Poetry contest entry speaks about positive possibilities of fostering connections at the practice of shared contemplation without condemnation; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

Comment from Cogitator
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Definitely a candidate, methinks. It's friendship at the very least, with potential to explode into a family. Very good choice of words in this meaningful entry. Best of the vote...

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021