Blessings for Barbara
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Thank you Yvette for joining in the fun. This is another very personalized poem for my mother, she is going to love being the centre of so much attention. Who knows, maybe she will follow the fiction of my 'least of your worries' flash, and actually join this club.
Katherine
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thank you Yvette for joining in the fun. This is another very personalized poem for my mother, she is going to love being the centre of so much attention. Who knows, maybe she will follow the fiction of my 'least of your worries' flash, and actually join this club.
Katherine
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Glad you approve, Lady Kat (wink, wink!) -- I tried to focus on the small things that really just bring a gentleness to the day whether you're alone or not, ya know? Things that can always make us smile no matter the circumstances... :) :) :) And, hey!, think it would be great if she joined! :) :) Take care out there and find your own 'sunshine and whistles' today! ;)
Comment from equestrik
very lovely write for your friend's birthday celebration. I hope to write something for it but just found out that it counts as one of our daily posts so i will wait until tomorrow.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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very lovely write for your friend's birthday celebration. I hope to write something for it but just found out that it counts as one of our daily posts so i will wait until tomorrow.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, my lady, for the encouraging review on this one (oh, and not a friend.... a mom of another FanStory member) -- I tried to focus on the small things that really just bring a gentleness to the day whether you're alone or not, ya know? Things that can always make us smile no matter the circumstances... :) :) :) Take care out there and find your own 'sunshine and whistles' today! ;)
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And all that is the reason we write!
Comment from Cindy Decker
Yvette,
This is a really nice birthday gift for Barbara.
I love the flow of your words and ideas, 'hefty pockets full of sunshine,' and 'faint whispers of your fav'rite song.
I have met a lot of people in live, college, army, and new people in my town; I have also lost touch with some of my old classmates and this is sad.
Yvette, I really like your poem, the way you talk about friends using unique phrases.
Have a really good Thursday,
It's always nice to talk to you!
Cindy
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Yvette,
This is a really nice birthday gift for Barbara.
I love the flow of your words and ideas, 'hefty pockets full of sunshine,' and 'faint whispers of your fav'rite song.
I have met a lot of people in live, college, army, and new people in my town; I have also lost touch with some of my old classmates and this is sad.
Yvette, I really like your poem, the way you talk about friends using unique phrases.
Have a really good Thursday,
It's always nice to talk to you!
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Cindy, for the encouraging review on this one -- I tried to focus on the small things that really just bring a gentleness to the day whether you're alone or not, ya know? Things that can always make us smile no matter the circumstances... :) :) :) Take care out there and find your own 'sunshine and whistles' today! ;) Yvette
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Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Happy Birthday Barbra who ever you are may you be blessed with many many more
You captured my attention from the start I always love a Birthday to see their cheerful faces and enjoying the day.
Thank you for sharing
Miss Cookie
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Happy Birthday Barbra who ever you are may you be blessed with many many more
You captured my attention from the start I always love a Birthday to see their cheerful faces and enjoying the day.
Thank you for sharing
Miss Cookie
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Cookie, for the review on this one -- I tried to focus on the small things that really just bring a gentleness to the day whether you're alone or not, ya know? Things that can always make us smile no matter the circumstances... :) :) :) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
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Your very welcome , and I must say you did a wonderful job
stay safe and be blessed
Cookie
Comment from lyenochka
This is lovely, Yvette! Thank you for joining in. And your poem isn't just a poem about any random thing but directly wishes Barbara a beautiful birthday in so many lovely colors!
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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This is lovely, Yvette! Thank you for joining in. And your poem isn't just a poem about any random thing but directly wishes Barbara a beautiful birthday in so many lovely colors!
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much, Helen, for the review on this one -- I tried to focus on the small things that really just bring a gentleness to the day whether you're alone or not, ya know? Things that can always make us smile no matter the circumstances... :) :) :) Take care of you out there! ;) Yvette
