Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

This is gruesomely horrific - I am a wimp with blood, but the most horrific part is that the narrator found it intoxicating. The horror is that these people are in our midst every day. Who will be next!!??

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019

Thank you, Lisa, for this awesome review. Yes, they are out there and I hope to never cross their path.
God bless
Steve

Comment from poetwatch

Excellent

Man, I really don't like Horror poetry, for it gives me the chills with all the thoughts one goes through to write it, and then me reading it, brrr. This is a horrific entry for the 13 Word Horror Poetry. Thank you for sharing a ghastly sight. It's good.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019

LOL! Thank you for the awesome review. I scare easy but enjoy reading Stephen King and watching horror flicks.
God bless
Steve

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Wow! this is quite horrifying as your words and gruesome artwork paint an even bigger image, very well written and presented and the best to you in your contest****kahpot

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 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019

Thank you, Kahpot. I enjoy this style of writing but don't want to be a participant. lol.
God bless
Steve