Goodbyes
She has one more goodbye32 total reviews
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent work. Great pacing and flow. I love how one senses the passage of time in the poem. "One more spring", "one last time", "fewer leaves". A poignant love poem. Very good. Hugh
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Excellent work. Great pacing and flow. I love how one senses the passage of time in the poem. "One more spring", "one last time", "fewer leaves". A poignant love poem. Very good. Hugh
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Thank you, Hugh
For years I wrote often on Fanstory but have been fighting Cancer....So I am trying again.
Thanks again for the encouragement.
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Very sorry to hear about the cancer. I will send positive, healing vibes. Hugh
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many thanks, Lo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem to say one more last goodbye to someone no.longer part of your life. It sometimes happen that we come across something that reminds us of another that's no.longer around.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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A very well-written poem to say one more last goodbye to someone no.longer part of your life. It sometimes happen that we come across something that reminds us of another that's no.longer around.
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2018
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Hello, and thank you so very much! I always listen to your comments and appreciate your time.
