Hide and Seek
Playing hide and seek41 total reviews
Comment from William Ross
very good on hiding seek, I remember the days playing this with the young ones. great write and entry, good luck and have a great day
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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very good on hiding seek, I remember the days playing this with the young ones. great write and entry, good luck and have a great day
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, William for your thoughtful review and five star rating
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, Pam, :)
This is a funny photo! Love the legs sticking out. The child will assume you cannot see all of them, LOL!
I see Evil Eddie found you:
Think if they canĂ¢??t see you, then, you canĂ¢??t see them. Lol
Wow, it's a little 'a' this time with the question marks. This is a site glitch, nothing you did. Sometimes it's hard to correct. I do it three times, if still there, it stays there!
Hey take care and don't hide your mind,
Nome
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Hello, Pam, :)
This is a funny photo! Love the legs sticking out. The child will assume you cannot see all of them, LOL!
I see Evil Eddie found you:
Think if they canĂ¢??t see you, then, you canĂ¢??t see them. Lol
Wow, it's a little 'a' this time with the question marks. This is a site glitch, nothing you did. Sometimes it's hard to correct. I do it three times, if still there, it stays there!
Hey take care and don't hide your mind,
Nome
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Lol. Your name is Nome? Thank you for your lovely review and five star rating
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Yes, rhymes with home. :P
Comment from Artasylum
Personally... I like the way children and pets do it... Once you pull back the cushion and discover them... they beam and show you every inch of them. good poem. yours, diana
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Personally... I like the way children and pets do it... Once you pull back the cushion and discover them... they beam and show you every inch of them. good poem. yours, diana
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Diana for your lovely review and excellent rating. I had a cat who would bend the slats in the venetian blinds. She liked to get in front of them between them and the window pane. She knew she should not be there. So, I go to the room to get something and I see this orange fluffy tail coming out from under the blinds. When I yelled at her, the look on her face was priceless. How did I know? She wondered
Comment from Harry Smith
I just love the picture you selected for this 5-7-5 poem that is excellently well written and it has lots of imagery and it also speaks such truths. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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I just love the picture you selected for this 5-7-5 poem that is excellently well written and it has lots of imagery and it also speaks such truths. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Harry. You must be catching up now. Thank you for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Love the
Picture. Your absolutely right in this poem as adults we definitely shouldn't hide our minds with others because we have so much to learn from one another. I thank you for sharing your wonderful mind and poem with us. Great job!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Love the
Picture. Your absolutely right in this poem as adults we definitely shouldn't hide our minds with others because we have so much to learn from one another. I thank you for sharing your wonderful mind and poem with us. Great job!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, Blue for your thoughtful review and five star rating
Comment from royowen
I think perhaps one might not like what's on some people's minds, do you mean people's hearts Pam? To make oneself vulnerable. But a great entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy,
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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I think perhaps one might not like what's on some people's minds, do you mean people's hearts Pam? To make oneself vulnerable. But a great entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy,
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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No, I did mean minds. Thank you, Roy for your thoughtful review and five star rating
Comment from Waishali Deshmukh
This is a very apt observation of how children and grown ups behave, that too in such a few words. Great pun on 'play'. Wish you all the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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This is a very apt observation of how children and grown ups behave, that too in such a few words. Great pun on 'play'. Wish you all the best for the contest.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Wow. Thank you, Waishali for one of your precious six star ratings. It is so appreciated. Thank you, also for your lovely review
Comment from JDRBAR
This is just so cute. Typical of children everywhere. But, hiding one's mind is a whole different sphere of thought. Yes, there are times when we all need to let someone find what's kept within.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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This is just so cute. Typical of children everywhere. But, hiding one's mind is a whole different sphere of thought. Yes, there are times when we all need to let someone find what's kept within.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you JDRBAR for your thoughtful review and excellent rating
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Pamusart, this is just sooo very cute. I love the picture - children are just adorable. This is a great entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. All syllables are in check to relay a truthful fact about humans at different stages of their lives. Great job and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Pamusart, this is just sooo very cute. I love the picture - children are just adorable. This is a great entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. All syllables are in check to relay a truthful fact about humans at different stages of their lives. Great job and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, PoemsOfDD for your lovely review and five star rating
Comment from meeshu
this is a very clever and poignant little poem. the picture is a riot and perfect visual for the verse. I remember my little brother thinking he was invisible when he closed HIS eyes. good times........meeshu
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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this is a very clever and poignant little poem. the picture is a riot and perfect visual for the verse. I remember my little brother thinking he was invisible when he closed HIS eyes. good times........meeshu
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2018
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Thank you, meeshu for your lovely review and excellent rating That photo just makes me smile
