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My Book of Poems 2010-2017

Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "Comfort from the Creator"
a collection of my poetry

50 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
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There's nothing like God's love, if one has experienced the ecstatic purity of it, you don't want anything less, I've had many experiences, but only one sovereign encounter! Good advice, and excellent contest entry Patty, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
    Hi Roy; thank you so much for your great review of this poem. I agree with you about the experience of His love,

    ~patty~
reply by royowen on 25-Jul-2017
    Most welcome
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes my friend this is well written and truly beautiful to know that God is their for us and can be a comfort through hard times well done good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
    thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece,

    ~patty~
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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This is simple, yet profound. Comfort is nearby. All we have to do is accept it. Sometimes everyone gets sad, but we don't need to stay there. Like a preacher friend of mine says. You can't stop the birds from flying over your head, but you don't have to let them build a nest there. I'm glad this was the only thing in my message box this morning.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
    Hi Thomas; I'm so happy I could bring you joy by being in your message box with this work. This one flowed together all by itself, so I know it came from Him,

    ~patty~
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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Why are you so sad?
What can I do to help you?
Here is my love for comfort.

I think the answer to that is - just be there and listen.

good luck with the contest, Patty.

Margaret

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
    Hi Margaret; thank you for reading this. Your review made me smile.

    ~patty~
Comment from patcelaw
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His word says we are to comfort others with the same kind of comfort with which He comforted us in our trials. Good luck in the contest and have a wonderful day. Patricia

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
    thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece,

    ~patty~
Comment from JACK2
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Love the visual you chose for this poem about Gods love who comforts us along our walk on earth. When we understand the comfort of his love then we are no longer sad. Great three line poem.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
    thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece,

    ~patty~
reply by JACK2 on 25-Jul-2017
    Your welcome.
Comment from Bucketlist
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A beautiful 5/7/7 along with your choice of picture. 3 line and other short poems are a great place to express a lot succinctly. I like this Faith poem .no pickies, and I wish you lots of luck
for the contest.
Hugs, Trisha

What is a kigo?

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
    thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece,

    ~patty~

    A 'kigo' is the season that a haiku addresses - I wrote those notes because I'm tired of writing a simple 5-7-5 or 5-7-7, and having it judged like a haiku. The rules of the haiku simply do not apply here.
Comment from Heather Knight
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Well, love is the most comforting thing God can offer his creatures and the best present we can give each other.
Lovely little poem and picture.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
    thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece,

    ~patty~
Comment from Asem.inspirations
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Hello Patty: I agree the beauty of His love surrounds us. If we just take a few moments to look around and take in all of His wondrous creations or meditate on them we would allow it all to calm our anger or to sooth our aching hearts. He knew that His wonderful creation would comfort those who let it. It is another extreme act of love on His part.

Your post is magnificent.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
    Hi Tier; thank you so much for your lovely review of this piece,

    ~patty~
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Thank YOU, Patty, for your lovely message to accompany Jayden T's beautiful artwork.
We could all use a little comfort every now and then, especially from our Heavenly Father.
Good luck!
~Dean

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
    Hi Dean;
    I'm so glad you enjoyed this work and I appreciate your words,

    ~patty~
reply by Dean Kuch on 25-Jul-2017
    Anytime...