Perennials of War
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Comment from Mastery
Hi, Barbara. We are not that far into this new book and you have the tension building very nicely already. Good for you. I like the sprinkling of real historical facts involving the Russians and the Germans, too. Yes, Hitler did die that way, or at least that's what I always heard. Except the part about the dog. I had not heard that.
Good write overall, my friend.
Good hook mat the end to keep us coming back, Barbara: "All heads turned at a sound of a doorbell ringing. " (who is there?)
Happy Holidays! Bob
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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Hi, Barbara. We are not that far into this new book and you have the tension building very nicely already. Good for you. I like the sprinkling of real historical facts involving the Russians and the Germans, too. Yes, Hitler did die that way, or at least that's what I always heard. Except the part about the dog. I had not heard that.
Good write overall, my friend.
Good hook mat the end to keep us coming back, Barbara: "All heads turned at a sound of a doorbell ringing. " (who is there?)
Happy Holidays! Bob
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
possession of your family's panting." (painting)
Earlier today the museum (comma after today)
A well written chapter. You must have done quite a bit of research for this. I like your novels because even though fiction, they are based on real events and places. Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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possession of your family's panting." (painting)
Earlier today the museum (comma after today)
A well written chapter. You must have done quite a bit of research for this. I like your novels because even though fiction, they are based on real events and places. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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Thank you for the help. I have made the corrections.
Comment from c_lucas
You did a good job of constructing the foundation of your story. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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You did a good job of constructing the foundation of your story. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Sankey
We had a movie called Downfall about Hitler and Eva Braun and co in the bunker. We got tired of it and sold it.
Good read again love all the history you have included. Suspense to the full as usual. One spag only. Shana hurried to the room she was staying in.["]
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We had a movie called Downfall about Hitler and Eva Braun and co in the bunker. We got tired of it and sold it.
Good read again love all the history you have included. Suspense to the full as usual. One spag only. Shana hurried to the room she was staying in.["]
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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Thank you for the catch. I will fix it.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good chapter. There is still a lot of art that has never been discovered. Millions of dollars worth hidden away somewhere. What good is artwork that can't be seen? What a waste.
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A very good chapter. There is still a lot of art that has never been discovered. Millions of dollars worth hidden away somewhere. What good is artwork that can't be seen? What a waste.
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Comment Written 11-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2016
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I agree. Thank you for the kind review.
