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Poems by Michael

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Comment from c_lucas
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Purple is the color of Royalty. Yellow is the color of Intelligence, and white the color of purity. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
    hey Charlie...thanks
Comment from Ricky1024
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hi Michael catch my latest post too soon too so sad too late something something like that I posted yesterday I actually have three albums and a picture of Prince I have total of 6/6 of his albums which night it is just passed are worth ten times their normal value so if if they're worth $25 a piece of the worst 250 each but the I'm not going to sell them I have $5,000 in my house but the catch my recent piece on dedication on him it's beautiful thanks for the 10:24

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2016
    hey Rick...-smile-
    yes Sir I will been tied up in stuff lately. yea I didn't ya know listen to him all the time. but whenever he caught my attention he kept it until he was done. You want to know the truth...I tried to dislike him...at first. but he always left me stunned at his superior ease in capturing and keeping attention.

    it was the same Michael Jackson....but who will ever forget that night he walked out center stage and moon danced history his. just left everyone shut up stupid....it don't happen very often man. big love-
Comment from Sis Cat
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This is a wonderful and deeply effective tribute. Your message is clear, creative and elegiac. You capture the essence of the man who wanted to create despite what Poppa said. He was a larger than life talent who had just performed here in Oakland last March. We will miss him sorely. Thank you for sharing and caring.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
    well thank you man,...love michael
Comment from DR DIP
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So sad prince has died today.Is this a tribute to Prince by chance? It is very well written in non rhyming verse. Thanks for sharing with us all

dip

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
    Hey Doc...thanks man. love Michael
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, you did such an awesome job with this poem tribute to Prince. I got sidetracked watching your video LoL I was supposed to have done the review an hour ago but I just went from video to video and it was so hard to stop.

I can't believe Prince is dead! It's such a shock and I am very sad to hear the news. I found out here in FAnstory because I don't own a television set and I spend most of my time here. Yours is the third poem about Prince.

Great job my friend,

*Gypsy*

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
    Hey Gypsy...-smile-...thanks...love Michael
Comment from MissMerri
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In my opinion, this is a wonderful tribute to a talented young man who stopped playing much too soon. The fifth stanza was especially powerful and beautiful. The whole poem is a testimony to your versatility as an artist yourself, Michael. It is rather amazing and I enjoyed every line and word. Thanks for writing this, and for sharing it with us. I also enjoyed the video. (I thought I'd run out of sixes, so I'm delighted to find I had one left.)

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    -bigsmile-...Hi Meadow.
    I wrote this fairly fast...if I'd known you'd show up i'd a tried harder. you are one of the best poets I've ever read. . thank you for this. love you Michael
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is a beautiful tribute to Prince, Michael. I was always struck by his deeply spiritual beliefs and that is evident in your incredible write to him.

The piano on stage surrounded with royal purple light and no pianist is a haunting visual to illustrate that he is longer with us here.

Very touching and lovely.

Gloria

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
    Hey G...thanks a lot...love michael
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Prince of Wisdom is a very nice tribute to Prince, passed away today at the age of 57. He is gone way too young but he is left a legacy that for many will be hard to beat. You share with us some of the struggles he had as a young man reconciling his religion and his passion, and his mother's role in it. Thanks for sharing. May God bless you!

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
    Hey DR....-smile- appreciate you taking the time. love Michael
reply by Dr. Nad on 30-Apr-2016

    You are very welcome,
    Embrace the Love from above!
Comment from ~Dovey
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Hi Michael,

I remember going to see the movie, Purple Rain, and thinking it was so amazing. I think at one point as an adult I even owned it, maybe we still do, I haven't seen it in forever! He was the epitome of the tortured soul in that... and I always wondered how it possibly echoed his own life. It is lovely that you've done a tribute to him today.

*Hugs*

Kim

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 30-Apr-2016
    Hi Kim...-smile- thank you Maam. love Michael
Comment from michaelcahill
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Beautiful tribute, Michael with a lot of detail most people don't know about his life. It wasn't a cake walk for a man with gifts. I did this too within moments of hearing this awful news. Well, thank you. This helps. Love, mikey

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2016
    Hey Bro...-smile-
    yea he had bad seizures...epilepsy I guess. what I didn't know was one day he says he walked up to his Mother and said...I wont be getting sick anymore. when she asked why...he responded that an angel had told him. I didn't know was so into God...but I was very glad to hear it....-smile- ...I always respected him, not only his obvious talent but the way he carried himself...his integrity, dignity. Funny I didn't know how small he was in physical stature...I never noticed until I was told to. be right there Bro. big love Michael