Poetry and Poison
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Poetry and Poison: Chapter 5"Poems started their marriage; poems ended it.
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Comment from OLA THOMAS
This post is a great revelation to giving so much meaning to your previous posts. Two people with two different beliefs. You did a wonderful job with your self-imposed search to unravel the connecting mysteries. I look forward to read more.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015
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This post is a great revelation to giving so much meaning to your previous posts. Two people with two different beliefs. You did a wonderful job with your self-imposed search to unravel the connecting mysteries. I look forward to read more.
ola thomas
Comment Written 29-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015
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Ola, yes, my parents' poems provide opposing beliefs. Reading my analysis of my father's "What is the Right Chemistry?" poem provides much meaning to my mother's "Soul Artist" poem in my previous posts. I am glad you enjoyed my search to unravel the mystery. Thank you for your review.
Comment from barkingdog
You are doing an amazing job of taking these poems and like pieces of a gigantic puzzle piecing them together to for a word-tapestry of the life of Jessie and Fred.
Fascinating read.
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You are doing an amazing job of taking these poems and like pieces of a gigantic puzzle piecing them together to for a word-tapestry of the life of Jessie and Fred.
Fascinating read.
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015
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Yes, barkingdog, the poems are pieces of a gigantic puzzle. I hope I have enough pieces to form a picture. Thank you for your review.
Comment from royowen
The discovered poems of your mum and dad is interesting, the poetry I write is generally different from the poetry most others write would be different, it's very difficult to leave God out of anything, at least for me. Because if one does it creates a lot more questions than answers, that is the problem, the spirit ceases to have meaning he does one know what is spirit if everything needs to be based on "chemistry" is that the closest we can get to spirituality, the spirit then becomes meaningless, but well done, Cat I find this search has captured my fascination, hope to read more, blessings, Roy.
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The discovered poems of your mum and dad is interesting, the poetry I write is generally different from the poetry most others write would be different, it's very difficult to leave God out of anything, at least for me. Because if one does it creates a lot more questions than answers, that is the problem, the spirit ceases to have meaning he does one know what is spirit if everything needs to be based on "chemistry" is that the closest we can get to spirituality, the spirit then becomes meaningless, but well done, Cat I find this search has captured my fascination, hope to read more, blessings, Roy.
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2015
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Yes, that is exactly what my father did--he mentions God in a footnote. I can see where he was coming from after the divorce. Even he in "P.S In Retrospect" found no solace in his chemistry theory. He was still alone. It took him years to regain his faith.
I am glad my search captured you imagination. Thank you for your review.
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Well done
