Comment from TOMORAL

Excellent

Vast my debt, in Christ I hide. What wonderful words that touch my heart. Very well written and expressed and left me with a feeling of joy.

Excellent writing, poet. Loved it.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

This is a brilliant spiritual Easter acrostic dear anon! It flows effortlessly and strikes a chord with the relationship between Christ and yourself. Nice one.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck with the contest!
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Goregous picture and the message is one I totally agree with. Poem was simple and direct. Some times the best way to write one. Message was crystal clear. I enjoy reading these types of poems. Write on.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi - this is a good acrostic - well chosen word. Above your title 'Achieved' (i before e). You do not need the apostrophe in the word judgements. Well done. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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Comment from maryjq57

Excellent

Beautiful, thank you. Reading it on Holy Thursday-what perfect timing. Hope you have a glorious Easter-as you celebrate the greatest triumph of all-Resurrection.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a technically well done Easter poem, with nice rhythm and flow and valid Christian sentiments. Couple of little SPAG nitpicks: Line 7 should be "You and I" instead of "You and me," and no comma is needed. It is generally agreed by grammarians that "judgement" should be spelled "judgment," but a few accept it either way. Could be that it is a US/British difference. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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Comment from Ekim777

Excellent

We need to believe that the cross of Calvary pinpoints the apex of Western civilization; a place where so many foster their belief and faith. I suppose we all need such things to keep us human. Our poet seems to question these things. In fact Calvary rests in the grand cathedral (The church of the holy Sepulcher) surrounded by the trappings of an old market place. I am not cynical. The high point of Judaism emanates from the Book of Job. Job's tribulations paved the way for the advent of Christianity. Our poet opens up many questions.
-Ekim777

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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Comment from risktaker

Excellent

Excellent message well expressed. I like the photo and the structure. I relate to "Removed transgressions, now I'm blest, you and me, pass judgement's test."
"Vast my debt, in Christ I hide." The word choice is effective and on point. the rhyme adds to the scenes depicted.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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reply by risktaker on 02-Apr-2015

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Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Beautiful artwork you posted and it complements your poem very well. It is an Acrostic about that Jesus died, and resurrected. A worthy entry for the prompt. Best wishes for the prompt.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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Comment from skye

Excellent

Your rhyming acrostic works so well for your powerful message of the resurrection.
His birth, His death, His love for all of us is priceless.
I enjoyed your words.
Excellent.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2015

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