Texas Dream Catcher
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Chapter Trece; Part Tres"Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
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Comment from judiverse
I love the excitement and tension in this. Soni still doesn't trust Jim, although she needs to. Danger surrounds her. I certainly disagree with Jim when he says everything is coincidence. There seems to be a definite plot afoot. Maybe Jim's trying to hide what she suspects. I love the part the dogs are playing in this. Soni's instincts are right. There's surely more trouble ahead. The dogs sense it, too. judi
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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I love the excitement and tension in this. Soni still doesn't trust Jim, although she needs to. Danger surrounds her. I certainly disagree with Jim when he says everything is coincidence. There seems to be a definite plot afoot. Maybe Jim's trying to hide what she suspects. I love the part the dogs are playing in this. Soni's instincts are right. There's surely more trouble ahead. The dogs sense it, too. judi
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review and your encouragement.
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You're welcome. I am loving the story. judi
Comment from mumsyone
An interesting chapter, Barbara; you left us with a page turner.
She listened for a moment and then said good bye (good-bye or goodbye).
"I've heard these two called a lot of things(,) but nanny is new."
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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An interesting chapter, Barbara; you left us with a page turner.
She listened for a moment and then said good bye (good-bye or goodbye).
"I've heard these two called a lot of things(,) but nanny is new."
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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I wondered about good-bye when I wrote it. Thank you for confirming my thoughts. I still hate commas.
Comment from Sasha
Just when I thought everything was going fine you abruptly throw in a scary gut feeling. I have learned to take Soni's gut feeling seriously and hope nothing bad lies ahead for both of them. I anxiously look forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Just when I thought everything was going fine you abruptly throw in a scary gut feeling. I have learned to take Soni's gut feeling seriously and hope nothing bad lies ahead for both of them. I anxiously look forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. I will give you a hint. It's not Soni that's in trouble this time.
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Damn, now you REALLY have me curious!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Your last paragraph has some spacing issues. You left us readers scared and in suspense . I am afraid to take a nap now.lol. Have a good week, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Your last paragraph has some spacing issues. You left us readers scared and in suspense . I am afraid to take a nap now.lol. Have a good week, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review. I will check the spacing. Leave it FS to mess it up.
Comment from royowen
Soni is obviously a savvy lady, she has a sixth senses for trouble! She says the she will little Emmanuel and Isabella in, and girl the young girl a job, at which Jim warns her not to be involved! Jim tells Soni, the evidence she has against certain People is just coincidental, and she says, nothing is coincidence! Great squabbling, of course they're in love? Well done, blessings, Roy. Spag:- Somi =Soni,
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Soni is obviously a savvy lady, she has a sixth senses for trouble! She says the she will little Emmanuel and Isabella in, and girl the young girl a job, at which Jim warns her not to be involved! Jim tells Soni, the evidence she has against certain People is just coincidental, and she says, nothing is coincidence! Great squabbling, of course they're in love? Well done, blessings, Roy. Spag:- Somi =Soni,
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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I will check this out and make corrections. Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome.
Comment from Michael Sundaresan
Your chapter is easy to follow without having much of the rest of the book so far. I like how you structure your dialogue with actions. You are a talented writer and I look forward to the next chapter of this book, which has me intrigued.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Your chapter is easy to follow without having much of the rest of the book so far. I like how you structure your dialogue with actions. You are a talented writer and I look forward to the next chapter of this book, which has me intrigued.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
she studies his face, which doesn't look good - great instance of nonverbal communication
you work back story in well through the dialogue
I like the sense of foreboding that leads into the next installment
Brooke
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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she studies his face, which doesn't look good - great instance of nonverbal communication
you work back story in well through the dialogue
I like the sense of foreboding that leads into the next installment
Brooke
Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Barbara,
Once again you have a nice cliff-hanger ending. It seems this Hughes idiot is hounding Soni, suggesting he has an axe to grind, or is in the pay of someone up to no good. In Jim's position I'd be tempted to make a call and have the guy pulled in and told to take a long holiday - or find other employment. Soni may not trust Jim, but she needs to stop trying to cut him off and share what she knows.
Patrick
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Hi Barbara,
Once again you have a nice cliff-hanger ending. It seems this Hughes idiot is hounding Soni, suggesting he has an axe to grind, or is in the pay of someone up to no good. In Jim's position I'd be tempted to make a call and have the guy pulled in and told to take a long holiday - or find other employment. Soni may not trust Jim, but she needs to stop trying to cut him off and share what she knows.
Patrick
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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I agree. Soni will find out the truth soon enough. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
Even the dogs are getting fed up with the constant bickering. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Even the dogs are getting fed up with the constant bickering. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you for the kind review.
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you're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
