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Haiku (Storm of snow)

Contest entry

62 total reviews 
Comment from mfowler
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Good haiku
True exposure of nature in this poem
Satori line captures a magic moment and adds to the environment painted in 'storm of snow
ravages the skies with blinding fury'
The two opening lines interconnect correctly
Good entry

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
    Thank you mfowler for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
    God Bless!
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Comment from James Dooney
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I feel this is pretty good. There is a really nice little flow on you have here, and the imagery is great too. Well done and good luck !

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
    Thank you James for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
    God Bless!
    Don't forget to vote for your favorite Haiku-snowstorm
Comment from Zue65
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I enjoyed this haiku, the image and the poetic lines complement each other to a perfect finish, projecting and sending the concept of "wholeness", so that one part is incomplete without the other. Thanks for sharing, God bless.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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    Thank you nassus for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
    God Bless!
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Comment from padumachitta
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Hi...bbbrrrrr, you captured a white out. When polar bears dance the rest of us shiver. This certainly has the images needed for a haiku.
I have no suggestions, it is fine the way it is:-) good luck
padumachitta

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
    Thank you padumachitta for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
    God Bless!
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Comment from Eric1
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This is a most wonderful entry for this particular competition, the chosen words perfectly match the wonderfully chosen image, Good luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
    Thank you Eric1 for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
    God Bless!
    Don't forget to vote for your favorite Haiku-snowstorm
reply by Eric1 on 17-Oct-2014
    You are very welcome my friend,and yes, I will be voting, have a lovely weekend.
Comment from Leigh Ann
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Aww...beautiful haiku. I'm like the polar bears. If it was snowing all year I'd be so happy. The pic is good too but not needed for the vibe of the poem to shine forth. Great job.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
    Thank you Leigh Ann for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
    God Bless!
    Don't forget to vote for your favorite Haiku-snowstorm
Comment from w.j.debi
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Excellent imagery in your words and the picture compliments it well. It does look like those bears are rising right out of the snow to combat each other. Strong word choices bring the action alive: storm, ravages, blinding fury, dance. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
    Thank you w.j.debi for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
    God Bless!
    Don't forget to vote for your favorite Haiku-snowstorm
Comment from Spitfire
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I've read some of the entries and thought this was one of the better ones. Sounds as if these bears like heavy metal or hard rock. Great use of alliteration with S and B.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
    Thank you Spitfire for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to the awesome feedback you leave.
    God Bless!
    Don't forget to vote for your favorite Haiku-snowstorm
Comment from INtity
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Nicely done! I love the imagery and descriptions in this poem! The poem is well designed with excellent choice of words. The polar bears dance in the snow's fury is well described.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2014
    Thank you INtity for the excellent review and stars. Your reviews are always welcome. God Bless!
Comment from Glasstruth
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You've got this poem all covered in white. Love the part about "polar bears dance" Maybe they should be on 'Dancing With The Stars' LOL. Now, that'd really be something. Well done. Good luck with the contest. Les

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 15-Oct-2014
    LOL! Thank you for the awesome review and stars. Your reviews are always welcomed and helpful in my growth. I wonder if I should have put the quotation marks with the "polar bears dance" So many people are adding this with no comment lol.
reply by Glasstruth on 15-Oct-2014
    I think the way you have it is just fine. :)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2014
    Ok cool, thank you.