Windows To The Past
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "The Rancher's Daughter"Poems about the old West.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL, Nancy, that was wonderful!!! A real corker of a poem. I laughed out loud when I read the last line, I don't think I've ever read a poem like this from you. Brilliant, Nancy, you must write more of these. Hugs, xsx Sandra.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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LOL, Nancy, that was wonderful!!! A real corker of a poem. I laughed out loud when I read the last line, I don't think I've ever read a poem like this from you. Brilliant, Nancy, you must write more of these. Hugs, xsx Sandra.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Sandra I am so glad I made you laugh. It is a funny poem isn't it. I was pretty proud of it when I finished it. Mark and Rhonda love it. (My son and daughter) LOL Hugs. Nancy
Comment from pattipac
LOL,Now who's the sly one? Excellent word-choice and rhyme-scheme make your farmer's daughter's tale come alive for this reviewer. Ah, the lovers' tales that blossom in Spring-time!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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LOL,Now who's the sly one? Excellent word-choice and rhyme-scheme make your farmer's daughter's tale come alive for this reviewer. Ah, the lovers' tales that blossom in Spring-time!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much for the review and the six.Patti. :<)
Comment from Wendyanne
Lol thanks for making me chuckle with your amusing piece of poetry Honey. I like the way you make it sound as if she's talking with a dialect as in me pa sprang into action.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Lol thanks for making me chuckle with your amusing piece of poetry Honey. I like the way you make it sound as if she's talking with a dialect as in me pa sprang into action.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Glad you enjoyed it Wendy. Thanks for the review. :<) Nancy
Comment from emrpoems
excellent use of enjambment
Good use of alliteration
solid abab rhymes and I love t he picture and the dialect
Love the ending lines and the humor
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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excellent use of enjambment
Good use of alliteration
solid abab rhymes and I love t he picture and the dialect
Love the ending lines and the humor
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the review Erica. Nancy
Comment from adewpearl
The Farmer's Daughter - add apostrophe for possessive
solid abab rhyming
nice touches of alliteration
good use of enjambment
I like the dialect
I love the humor of your story :-)
Brooke
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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The Farmer's Daughter - add apostrophe for possessive
solid abab rhyming
nice touches of alliteration
good use of enjambment
I like the dialect
I love the humor of your story :-)
Brooke
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thank you Brooke. I am so pleased that you like it! Nancy
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! You've written a classic song here! I can just see them gathered round the bar singing this! Love that last line: He didn't touch me knickers! Bravo!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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LOL! You've written a classic song here! I can just see them gathered round the bar singing this! Love that last line: He didn't touch me knickers! Bravo!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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I am so happy you like it Phyllis. I think I will change out to that last picture. What do you think. I had so much fun writing this I just had to have the perfect picture. That Tess looked like an owl. LOL Thanks for that six! Hugs. Nancy
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I agree. I think the goat and girl was the best since it has high resolution and will show up more clearly.
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Thanks Phyllis. I value your opinion. Nancy
Comment from Loren (7)
:) this had me smiling all the way though and love that this bonny lass remained chaste despite all the rumors. Pretty clever way to catch her man, I'd say. Loren
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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:) this had me smiling all the way though and love that this bonny lass remained chaste despite all the rumors. Pretty clever way to catch her man, I'd say. Loren
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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I thought I would make the drummer the victim for a change Loren. LOL Thanks for the review. Nancy
Comment from drivenbackward
That was a lot of fun, Honeycomb. You even got me to chuckle out loud, which isn't easy. The last line is a home run. A very engaging poem the whole way.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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That was a lot of fun, Honeycomb. You even got me to chuckle out loud, which isn't easy. The last line is a home run. A very engaging poem the whole way.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Glad you enjoyed it, Thank you for the review. Nancy
Comment from strandregs
Glad I popped by
You have become an accomplished writer.
A pleasure to read a flower among briers.
Flows preacriously . Just had to use that word though i mean beautifully.Z.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Glad I popped by
You have become an accomplished writer.
A pleasure to read a flower among briers.
Flows preacriously . Just had to use that word though i mean beautifully.Z.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Hi Z! Haven't seen you in a while! Glad to see you as well. Thanks for the generous response to my poem. Nancy
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Honeycomb: So glad that you have a great father with a gun! Kids now a days need a dad that cares. I like the village gossips tell the tale..brings forth winks and snickers. Old Finn has to repent and plow, work now, for his bride. Well written and congrats to the awards!
I am taking Brooke's children poetry class in October. My husband got mad at the bill, oh well, I will enjoy the class and pay the bill too. My husband works hard as a grocery manager. He thinks that I sit on my butt typing all day!!!
Enjoy your day! flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Honeycomb: So glad that you have a great father with a gun! Kids now a days need a dad that cares. I like the village gossips tell the tale..brings forth winks and snickers. Old Finn has to repent and plow, work now, for his bride. Well written and congrats to the awards!
I am taking Brooke's children poetry class in October. My husband got mad at the bill, oh well, I will enjoy the class and pay the bill too. My husband works hard as a grocery manager. He thinks that I sit on my butt typing all day!!!
Enjoy your day! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Hmmm, Sounds like trouble brewing. Best fix him a candlelight diner with all the trimmings. LOL Thanks for the review. Nancy
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I am fall cleaning a lake cottage and a trucker's house to earn the money. I am putting the mom's touch on these, sparkly clean! Thanks for the candlelight idea too!
flylikeaneagle
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Cherish your time together. It is precious.
