A Funny Face
rhyming quatrains in 8/6/8/6158 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
It is the little things in life that delight us and make the world a happy place.
Excellent alliteration in
Funny face
Fall flat
But bites
Carts crash
Dreams are dashed
Excellent internal rhymes in the first and third line of each stanza to make the verse even more catchy.
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It is the little things in life that delight us and make the world a happy place.
Excellent alliteration in
Funny face
Fall flat
But bites
Carts crash
Dreams are dashed
Excellent internal rhymes in the first and third line of each stanza to make the verse even more catchy.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
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Debi, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
I want to be on that porch.... what a cute set of quatrains , I enjoyed the balance of rhythm in the 8-6-8-6.
What funny faces, and yes that's all it takes to turn a day around. Good job Brooke, Carolyn
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I want to be on that porch.... what a cute set of quatrains , I enjoyed the balance of rhythm in the 8-6-8-6.
What funny faces, and yes that's all it takes to turn a day around. Good job Brooke, Carolyn
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much, Carolyn :-) Sawyer is always in a good mood when they wait for Andy to arrive because he LOVES to sit in the driver's seat of his car and make the windows go up and down. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Rubylou
I enjoyed your quatrains. You write with such a lively flow.
There is a perfect upbeat message here.
A funny face or faces certainly do he trick to brighten up anyone's day.
A wonderful picture as well, to celebrate a happier day.
Rubylou
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I enjoyed your quatrains. You write with such a lively flow.
There is a perfect upbeat message here.
A funny face or faces certainly do he trick to brighten up anyone's day.
A wonderful picture as well, to celebrate a happier day.
Rubylou
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
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Rubylou, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from mommydear42
You do realize, don't you that if possible I would give all of you poems 6 stars..or maybe 7. Once again, Adewpearl has churned out a winner. It's a precious little poem, not great,
one that children would want read to them again and again. I think it somewhat akin to, "Winkin, Blinkin, and nod one
night sailed off in a wooden shoe. It's the kind of poem that lasts in children's minds forever. Good for you.
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You do realize, don't you that if possible I would give all of you poems 6 stars..or maybe 7. Once again, Adewpearl has churned out a winner. It's a precious little poem, not great,
one that children would want read to them again and again. I think it somewhat akin to, "Winkin, Blinkin, and nod one
night sailed off in a wooden shoe. It's the kind of poem that lasts in children's minds forever. Good for you.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
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Mommydear, I very much appreciate your wonderfully encouraging comments :-) Brooke
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I once wrote a poem about how a simple smile can turn any day into a better on and maybe give a person that extra umph to get through the day but I won't lie a funny face is even better. Great job
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I once wrote a poem about how a simple smile can turn any day into a better on and maybe give a person that extra umph to get through the day but I won't lie a funny face is even better. Great job
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
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ExperiencingLiphe, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Caressa_08
A happy philosophy exhibited with these wonderful pictures to show children, that yes, their day might not have gone as good as they wanted it to... Though, making funny faces will just turn a day around.
Caressa
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A happy philosophy exhibited with these wonderful pictures to show children, that yes, their day might not have gone as good as they wanted it to... Though, making funny faces will just turn a day around.
Caressa
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
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Caressa, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from maggieadams
I noticed that peas for your grand kids are a negative connotation. I am a farmer's daughter and peas are in my blood...I should send you some fresh peas, they are delicious.
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I noticed that peas for your grand kids are a negative connotation. I am a farmer's daughter and peas are in my blood...I should send you some fresh peas, they are delicious.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
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maggie, thank you so much :-) I hate peas to this very day, though I must admit, the ones I was served were canned. LOL :-) Brooke
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Big difference.
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I bet there are several foods I think I hate because I haven't had the authentic thing :-)
Comment from Heidixoxo
Hello friend,
Yet another great piece you have written for us all to read. Such a creative poem full of smiles. I really think you chose the perfect piece of artwork for this as well. Thanks for sharing and best of luck to you!! xoxo
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Hello friend,
Yet another great piece you have written for us all to read. Such a creative poem full of smiles. I really think you chose the perfect piece of artwork for this as well. Thanks for sharing and best of luck to you!! xoxo
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
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Heidi, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwijenny
Perfect poem for how it is when you are are little and so easily diverted...it amazes me how much little children smile and laugh....you have captured that in this poem
Well done
God bless
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Perfect poem for how it is when you are are little and so easily diverted...it amazes me how much little children smile and laugh....you have captured that in this poem
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
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Jenny, thank you for your thoughtful response to my poem :-) Brooke
Comment from lancellot
A wonder poem, and filled with truth. There are times when a smile or a funny look are as infectious as the flu. It makes coming home so wonderful too. Well said.
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A wonder poem, and filled with truth. There are times when a smile or a funny look are as infectious as the flu. It makes coming home so wonderful too. Well said.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2014
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lancellot, thank you so much :-) Brooke
