Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

Another outstanding blank verse sonnet from my outstanding poet-friend. How beautiful you write this with emotion, and the presentation is stunning.
Smiles,
Karyn : )

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014

Thank you Karyn, my fellow-student in the Blank Verse class. What do you hear from our instructor these days? I hope all is well in NC. I always love hearing from you, so please come back soon. Hugs, MM

reply by IndianaIrish on 22-Jul-2014

Come back soon? Have I been gone? Have I missed some of your posts? I've been here and posting a few things. Ray is fine. Been busy at work and traveled to Ohio for a wedding this past weekend. I'll tell him you asked about him.

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Exceptional

Dear Miss Merri - This one makes my heart ache all over again. Such deep longing, and sense of being with one so loved and yet too far.

Loved the easy flowing read. I could envision your imagery, each line expressive and deeply rooted with that love we hold most dear.

Exceptional in every way. I found this soothed me so much - coming back on line and reading this was healing and loving to those parts still aching.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014

Maureen, you have no idea how much this review meant to me. I thank you for your generous rating, your beautiful words and your tender heart. You are an amazing person and I'm so glad you are here!

reply by Maureen's Pen on 22-Jul-2014

That put a big smile on my face my friend - thanks so much:)
Hugs
m