A New Life
100 word short story34 total reviews
Comment from Millibrad
I like this flash fiction story with it's surprise ending. You have made excellent use of your hundred word allowance. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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I like this flash fiction story with it's surprise ending. You have made excellent use of your hundred word allowance. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story, Millibrad, and please accept my gratitude for your kind review and comments. Thanks for reading and for your good luck wish for the contest.
Comment from barleygirl
Definitely the best entry in this contest, that I've read so far! This is light years beyond the other entries, in the sophistication of your message. You've not only told a complete story, but you've also started it out by leading us to believe one thing, then the twist at the end is so unexpected, yet rewarding & perfect for the story. Very well done 100-word dash! Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Definitely the best entry in this contest, that I've read so far! This is light years beyond the other entries, in the sophistication of your message. You've not only told a complete story, but you've also started it out by leading us to believe one thing, then the twist at the end is so unexpected, yet rewarding & perfect for the story. Very well done 100-word dash! Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Wow, what a fantastic review for my story, barleygirl, and your encouraging comments are more than what I could hope for. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your thoughts, and for your good luck wish for the contest.
Comment from Kingsland
You had me going in this short story. I thought she was about to get married. This was a very interesting story line with a surprise ending for me. I enjoyed reading and writing this response for it... John
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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You had me going in this short story. I thought she was about to get married. This was a very interesting story line with a surprise ending for me. I enjoyed reading and writing this response for it... John
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your kind review and comments for my little story, John. I'm so glad you enjoyed my the ending, and thank you for reading!
Comment from Bina1
I love graduations........such a task of meaning, completion and accomplishment..........but this one blew me away! This is simply too great!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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I love graduations........such a task of meaning, completion and accomplishment..........but this one blew me away! This is simply too great!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014
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I'm so thrilled by your generous rating and review for my little story, Bina. Thank you so much for reading and taking the time took share your thoughts. Thank you so very much.
