On a Clear Day?
A Kyrielle Sonnet32 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
I love the proximate rhyme, so hush with those pleas LOL
good alliteration in breezes brush
excellent personification of things like winter with its teasing fingers
good alliteration in summer sun
excellent use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line and stanza to stanza
strong choice of refrain line
I really love the personification throughout as it helps you establish mood so well
a beautifully composed Kyrielle Sonnet :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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I love the proximate rhyme, so hush with those pleas LOL
good alliteration in breezes brush
excellent personification of things like winter with its teasing fingers
good alliteration in summer sun
excellent use of enjambment to keep thoughts flowing from line to line and stanza to stanza
strong choice of refrain line
I really love the personification throughout as it helps you establish mood so well
a beautifully composed Kyrielle Sonnet :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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I absolutely adore French poetry forms, they have such a smooth flow about them, so lyrical. Thanks so much for the awesome review. If you approve I know I did something right
Comment from Joy Graham
This is beautiful, Dawn! We are to tackle the kyrielle sonnet in class next week. I have tried them before but need more practice. I have much to learn from you!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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This is beautiful, Dawn! We are to tackle the kyrielle sonnet in class next week. I have tried them before but need more practice. I have much to learn from you!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2014
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Awwww what an amazing first review. I owe you one, no two LOL You're so sweet. You have to be careful learning from me though, I have a tendency to cheat sometimes. Especially on form poems. You'll have to let me know how that class goes.
