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Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi Barbara,

I think even Cash is beginning to think Paige is right about the ghost of Bradley. I am not sure, if he is real, that he means to harm anyone. He leaves clues like he wants someone to recognize that he exists. However, what his intentions are escapes me. It does seem that Morgan reacts to something or someone only he can sense. This is an exciting chapter....blessings, chey

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


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Comment from lindalcreel
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This was another well written post. I'm beginning to believe in ghosts, but I'd love to know what Bradley is trying to tell them. Maybe there is more than one ghost and hes' trying to warn them. Very exciting story, with lots of mystery and suspense. Your dialogue is authentic and your characters are string and vibrant. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


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    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by lindalcreel on 02-Sep-2013
    Weclome:)
Comment from RazberryBullet
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I really like this mystery story with Paige and Morgan. The dog knows more what's going on than the people :)

Nice twist having Cash's mother's tires slashed. More animosity.

Well done!

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


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Comment from Selina Stambi
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My goodness, the plot thickens as the tale gets more exciting!

Another interesting, nicely written read, Barbara.

Hope you've enjoyed your first week back at school. :)

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from bhogg
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Hi Baraba - another great post. You seem to write in an effortless way. The ebb and flow of your posts are enviable. Well done. Bill

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


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    Thank you for the kind review and words.
Comment from abbasjoy
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And the plot thickens. The more answers they actually have, the more questions seem to arise. Good idea for them to be writing down the facts.
But, this is getting dangerous now, because not only are bad things happening to Paige but now it spreads to Cash's mom who wouldn't hurt a fly.
Whoever is doing this definitely means business.

Another good post, and keeping us at the edge of our chairs wondering "who done it?"


 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


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Comment from JM daSilva
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You continue to make me very curious about your mystery. Good job.
"Then why doesn't he just tell us the answers?" asked Cash. GOOD POINT

Editing suggestions
You don't believe Bradley Bookman EXISTS, SO he showed you how real he is."
the burgundy brick lying on the living room carpet. "I doubt they'll get a FINGERPRINT off this. ITS SURFACE is too rough."

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2013
    I thought I had fixed the its. I guess I forgot to save. Anyway, thank you for the kind review and the eagle eye.
reply by JM daSilva on 02-Sep-2013
    Welcome. Great pleasure as usual.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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I think they are getting nearer the answers and that's
why someone's trying to scare them off - what with
the slashing tyres and breaking window. And now the mother
is being harassed, adding to this intriguing story.




Just (')cause

It's surface is too rough - Its

Margaret

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


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    I struggle on it's and its. I can't seem to get it right. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
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Well, it seems like the ghosts are getting full attention from Cash and Paiges. I like all the details that gives a feeling of reality.
Very good job Barbara!
:)

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Hareem.S
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Like always this is a very interesting chapter. I have missed out huge chunks of this book, but it was very refreshing to read it after a while. Like how the story has developed.

 Comment Written 02-Sep-2013


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