Visible Flight of Invisible Might!
An invisible might drives one to a visible flight.78 total reviews
Comment from KathySueWiddowsAdams
Well Said I liked your 1st verse very much as there is such a glorious sight of a bird in flight. And the beauty that is in all gods things is truly a sight to behold. Thank you for your words.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Well Said I liked your 1st verse very much as there is such a glorious sight of a bird in flight. And the beauty that is in all gods things is truly a sight to behold. Thank you for your words.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi RP,
You have penned a fine poem for the faith contest. Your AA/BB rhyme is musical, the flow is even, word choices are expressive and the message is profound and thoughtful. Well done and good luck in the contest....chey
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi RP,
You have penned a fine poem for the faith contest. Your AA/BB rhyme is musical, the flow is even, word choices are expressive and the message is profound and thoughtful. Well done and good luck in the contest....chey
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi Chey,
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful, morale boosting comments and the best wishes! God bless you.
Comment from Artasylum
I love every thought in this poem... and I truly believe it is true and that in God all things are not only possible but likely. thanks for the great poem looking forward. Yours, Diana
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I love every thought in this poem... and I truly believe it is true and that in God all things are not only possible but likely. thanks for the great poem looking forward. Yours, Diana
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Have faith in God to be wise, brave and bold,
The craved success is yours as unalloyed gold!
a lovely spiritual poem, RP - with a smooth flow to rhythm and rhyme -- your faith shining through your words.
in God's light
Margaret
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Have faith in God to be wise, brave and bold,
The craved success is yours as unalloyed gold!
a lovely spiritual poem, RP - with a smooth flow to rhythm and rhyme -- your faith shining through your words.
in God's light
Margaret
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi Margaret,
Thank you very much for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from Bobby Jo
Thank you so much, for such a powerful message. I believe in everything this beautiful poem speaks of. God is omnipotent, omniscient and omnipresent. I did a bible study on this one time. Amazing.
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Thank you so much, for such a powerful message. I believe in everything this beautiful poem speaks of. God is omnipotent, omniscient and omnipresent. I did a bible study on this one time. Amazing.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi Bobby Jo,
Please accept my heartfelt thanks for your so nice, thoughtful, morale boosting comments and the Six Stars! God bless you.
Comment from God's Writer
A great poem and a more wonderful sermon also. This comforted my heart even more than it is already comforted by God. I thank you for these words you have written from on-high.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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A great poem and a more wonderful sermon also. This comforted my heart even more than it is already comforted by God. I thank you for these words you have written from on-high.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from adewpearl
good use of rhyming couplets
good internal rhyming with insight/bright and goal/soul
and in sight/upright
and in near at rear
and in shy/try
good consonance in craved success
you deliver a thoughtful message of faith in good poetic form
Brooke
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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good use of rhyming couplets
good internal rhyming with insight/bright and goal/soul
and in sight/upright
and in near at rear
and in shy/try
good consonance in craved success
you deliver a thoughtful message of faith in good poetic form
Brooke
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from Malachai
This is a great poem about faith and how to achieve it. I meditate so I truly get this. I do see a few things I would change to make it stronger: the last line I would drop as, the first line I would drop the, the eighth line I would use perform instead of to do, the tenth line I would say, and helps you thrive, the third stanza is beautifully written, Rebecca
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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This is a great poem about faith and how to achieve it. I meditate so I truly get this. I do see a few things I would change to make it stronger: the last line I would drop as, the first line I would drop the, the eighth line I would use perform instead of to do, the tenth line I would say, and helps you thrive, the third stanza is beautifully written, Rebecca
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from Eternal Muse
I very much like the spirituality of this message, and its strong appeal. Faith sustains us like nothing else; and I decided to write more spiritual poems myself. They ease the mind and heal the spirit.
Favorite lines:
With heart and soul if hard you strive,
God is near at rear to help you thrive;
Look within and find Him everywhere,
Bow to God and go ahead in His care.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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I very much like the spirituality of this message, and its strong appeal. Faith sustains us like nothing else; and I decided to write more spiritual poems myself. They ease the mind and heal the spirit.
Favorite lines:
With heart and soul if hard you strive,
God is near at rear to help you thrive;
Look within and find Him everywhere,
Bow to God and go ahead in His care.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2013
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Hi
Thanks a lot for your so nice, thoughtful and morale boosting comments.
Comment from alexgeorge
He is the one we lean on in times of strife, He is our inspiration when we tackle a task, from His example we see how we must lead this life, He grants us the wings to fly.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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He is the one we lean on in times of strife, He is our inspiration when we tackle a task, from His example we see how we must lead this life, He grants us the wings to fly.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2013
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Hi Alexgeorge,
Thank you very much your nice review.
