Love Songs For Every Heart
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Comment from forestport12
I liked how you captured the essence of how from after the darkest moment there can be relief and means to find cleansing from the same natural source. There is a time and purpose for everything under the sun. Amen. Well done.
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I liked how you captured the essence of how from after the darkest moment there can be relief and means to find cleansing from the same natural source. There is a time and purpose for everything under the sun. Amen. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This is so graceful and lovingly shared MissMerri. It had me in tears, and I seem to be at a loss of words.
But I think he will know I bow my head with yours and offer up my love and strength to one I know as a dear friend.
Maureen
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This is so graceful and lovingly shared MissMerri. It had me in tears, and I seem to be at a loss of words.
But I think he will know I bow my head with yours and offer up my love and strength to one I know as a dear friend.
Maureen
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
Comment from Carrie Smith
MissMerri, lovely written blank verse of the love, hurt, and understanding empathy as you stand steadfast for his time of healing, when once again you can sing together. It was a good thing to read this while trying to wrap my head around the horrible tragedy that occurred in Conn. today. Thank you. xxCarrie
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MissMerri, lovely written blank verse of the love, hurt, and understanding empathy as you stand steadfast for his time of healing, when once again you can sing together. It was a good thing to read this while trying to wrap my head around the horrible tragedy that occurred in Conn. today. Thank you. xxCarrie
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi MissMerri,
I loved everything about this piece from the artwork to the last word and what a beautiful way to express your feelings to your friend. I hope you plan to give this to him. Your free verse is beautifully written and obviously it is written from the heart. Good job and thank you for sharing.
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Hi MissMerri,
I loved everything about this piece from the artwork to the last word and what a beautiful way to express your feelings to your friend. I hope you plan to give this to him. Your free verse is beautifully written and obviously it is written from the heart. Good job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
Comment from McMurry903
MissMerri, this is a wonderful blank verse poem.Such strong imagery and tender words to a friend in need.I love your piece and wish you the very best of luck in the contest! Brian
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MissMerri, this is a wonderful blank verse poem.Such strong imagery and tender words to a friend in need.I love your piece and wish you the very best of luck in the contest! Brian
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
Comment from JMRoland
Hi MissMerri,
This free verse poem about grief is skillfully and lovingly composed. There is empathy, understanding, wisdom and assurance here in abundance. These words should offer great comfort to your friend. God's peace and healing to all who read it. Well done.
JMR
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Hi MissMerri,
This free verse poem about grief is skillfully and lovingly composed. There is empathy, understanding, wisdom and assurance here in abundance. These words should offer great comfort to your friend. God's peace and healing to all who read it. Well done.
JMR
Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
Comment from EMB
This poem is definitely a terrific dedication and a wonderful prayer for someone who's obviously dear to you. Your words were smooth and effortless, coming from the heart. I really enjoyed this piece, and my heart goes out to your friend.
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This poem is definitely a terrific dedication and a wonderful prayer for someone who's obviously dear to you. Your words were smooth and effortless, coming from the heart. I really enjoyed this piece, and my heart goes out to your friend.
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
Comment from Alaskastory
'Silenced Songs' is a touching message for a dear friend, but it is much more on this tragic day. You express so much of what everyone across America feels for the families who lost a child today. Thank you for your heart-touching words, MissM.
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'Silenced Songs' is a touching message for a dear friend, but it is much more on this tragic day. You express so much of what everyone across America feels for the families who lost a child today. Thank you for your heart-touching words, MissM.
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2012
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Yes... I wrote this before I knew about this sad story, but heard of it soon afterward. As I was typing it to post, I thought of all the grieving parents and my heart breaks for all of them. It is indeed a sad, sad day for our nation, thinking of this huge loss, so senseless and unnecessary. Thanks for reading the poem. Brucie's memorial is Sunday night.
