Fire Inside
A short poem162 total reviews
Comment from Greek133130
Oh my goodness! That is really good and expresses so much in just three short lines! I really like this one and I think it has many inspiring meanings. Great job!
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Oh my goodness! That is really good and expresses so much in just three short lines! I really like this one and I think it has many inspiring meanings. Great job!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
Comment from Titanx9
This is truly a scorcher, I can almost feel the passion, or possibly lust, oozing from the screen. It the 5-7-5 form count. You nailed this one, and the artwork adds fuel to this raging conflagration.
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This is truly a scorcher, I can almost feel the passion, or possibly lust, oozing from the screen. It the 5-7-5 form count. You nailed this one, and the artwork adds fuel to this raging conflagration.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
Comment from DIS-illusioned
Excellent 5-7-5 syllabic format.
"You light a lost spark"
Is this metaphoric for a positive spark, e.g. love, or a negative one--anger?
This poem is ambiguous in meaning. What is the core message it's trying to give?
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Excellent 5-7-5 syllabic format.
"You light a lost spark"
Is this metaphoric for a positive spark, e.g. love, or a negative one--anger?
This poem is ambiguous in meaning. What is the core message it's trying to give?
Comment Written 13-Jun-2012
Comment from Glasstruth
Wow! I can feel the heat. Great artwork to match. Love the second line from this, "You pour embers from your heart" It's the heart of the poem. Well done. Les
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Wow! I can feel the heat. Great artwork to match. Love the second line from this, "You pour embers from your heart" It's the heart of the poem. Well done. Les
Comment Written 12-Jun-2012
Comment from amada
This is a great poem, written between a limited number of syllables it makes it more special. This is a great work. Best wishes in the contest.
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This is a great poem, written between a limited number of syllables it makes it more special. This is a great work. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2012
Comment from pattipac
Your excellent picture choice introduces your well chosen words to paint a realistic picture of a smoldering love that has been rekindled by your lover actions, and possibly words. Resulting in a new found courage to trust again.
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Your excellent picture choice introduces your well chosen words to paint a realistic picture of a smoldering love that has been rekindled by your lover actions, and possibly words. Resulting in a new found courage to trust again.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2012
Comment from ~Sarina Ali-McBride~
Good poem and nice picture along with it. I really liked the whole you, you, you're. That was pretty good. I hope you do well in the poetry contest.
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Good poem and nice picture along with it. I really liked the whole you, you, you're. That was pretty good. I hope you do well in the poetry contest.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2012
Comment from jaeladarling
Nice work for your first! I love the second line - "You pour embers from your heart." What great imagery! Nice work on this, and thanks for sharing. (Good luck too!)
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Nice work for your first! I love the second line - "You pour embers from your heart." What great imagery! Nice work on this, and thanks for sharing. (Good luck too!)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2012
Comment from Keri353
Great job for your first 5-7-5 and very well done. I enjoy the 5-7-5 poetry as it gets right to the point as you have done here. Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest. Blessings, Keri
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Great job for your first 5-7-5 and very well done. I enjoy the 5-7-5 poetry as it gets right to the point as you have done here. Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest. Blessings, Keri
Comment Written 12-Jun-2012
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello there Vincent
I am Glen Bear Smith and I am your newest fan. This poem is magnificent and I thin it is has a good shot at winning the
5-7-5 Poetry contest entry. I'll keep an eye on your work. I'll be off site for a while but will pop in from time to time
Bear
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Hello there Vincent
I am Glen Bear Smith and I am your newest fan. This poem is magnificent and I thin it is has a good shot at winning the
5-7-5 Poetry contest entry. I'll keep an eye on your work. I'll be off site for a while but will pop in from time to time
Bear
Comment Written 12-Jun-2012
