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Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Jj,
You are so right many write poetry without passion or compassion. Those poems are dull and forgettable. You have not only written a beautiful poem but your message is one I hope many read. Did you read Bluepixel's poem? I think it is called The Last Post. Anyway she talks about the same thing. She said she is tired of reading poems that sound like a child wrote them. I must agree. I love everything about this poem and am so sorry I don't have a six for you....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Hi Jj,
You are so right many write poetry without passion or compassion. Those poems are dull and forgettable. You have not only written a beautiful poem but your message is one I hope many read. Did you read Bluepixel's poem? I think it is called The Last Post. Anyway she talks about the same thing. She said she is tired of reading poems that sound like a child wrote them. I must agree. I love everything about this poem and am so sorry I don't have a six for you....blessings, chey
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
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Chey, send bluepixel to this! Maybe I heard her quest,
thanks so much.
Comment from ernesto escarro
Paint For Me Poetic Art
A very lovely poem to notice,
asking God to paint her a color of
thought and imagery.
And wish for hearing the voice from heaven
with knowledge who God is to love and sacrifice
for us. That at in time of darkness, God speaks
of His promise to fulfill.
And asks God to relieve her from worries after all
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Paint For Me Poetic Art
A very lovely poem to notice,
asking God to paint her a color of
thought and imagery.
And wish for hearing the voice from heaven
with knowledge who God is to love and sacrifice
for us. That at in time of darkness, God speaks
of His promise to fulfill.
And asks God to relieve her from worries after all
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Thank you for stopping in!
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Thanks for sharing. God bless.
Comment from keimosobie
I hope I am up to your task. Yes you have described what you want from your poetry quite well. Sometimes I wonder if poetry is capable of doing that by itself. I think for now I'll try not to expect to much. Lol
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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I hope I am up to your task. Yes you have described what you want from your poetry quite well. Sometimes I wonder if poetry is capable of doing that by itself. I think for now I'll try not to expect to much. Lol
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
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That's my point, dear.
You can do anything you want! But you must first believe!
Comment from Tonulak
Dear jewel,
This was really beautiful! Why must we hide the poetry of our heart and mind, if we can reach beyond. We need to learn the value of each word, its conotation, it's subtext. Understand the complexity of everything as well as it's simplicity. A beautiful to all poets, and it found a place in me, personally.
Fabulous and rich in emotion and imagery--Ted
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Dear jewel,
This was really beautiful! Why must we hide the poetry of our heart and mind, if we can reach beyond. We need to learn the value of each word, its conotation, it's subtext. Understand the complexity of everything as well as it's simplicity. A beautiful to all poets, and it found a place in me, personally.
Fabulous and rich in emotion and imagery--Ted
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
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Ted! Hi!
so glad this touched you!
Comment from Narvik
Ah, great to see a poet write to inspire other poets. I never write poetry, but this does a service for others on this site.
It's unbelievable how many cliches you see on here. I used to point them out, but people get so defensive that I quite doing it. I saw one recently with the ultimate cliche: "You're my night in shining armor."
Sheesh.
Anyway, I don;t review a lot of poetry, but I loved this. Straight-forward and bold and thought-provoking and well-polished etc.
~ CJ
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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Ah, great to see a poet write to inspire other poets. I never write poetry, but this does a service for others on this site.
It's unbelievable how many cliches you see on here. I used to point them out, but people get so defensive that I quite doing it. I saw one recently with the ultimate cliche: "You're my night in shining armor."
Sheesh.
Anyway, I don;t review a lot of poetry, but I loved this. Straight-forward and bold and thought-provoking and well-polished etc.
~ CJ
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
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Hey captain! Thank you SO MUCH!
Comment from Janilou
"Paint the sunset with your eloquent pen,
Meet my heart in dawn's afterglow,
or rise with me to wait for inspiration
in the cozy seat of the crescent moon"
Wow! Jewell, this is awesome! I loved it. How inspiring this is. Thanks for creating this beautiful piece.
Jan
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"Paint the sunset with your eloquent pen,
Meet my heart in dawn's afterglow,
or rise with me to wait for inspiration
in the cozy seat of the crescent moon"
Wow! Jewell, this is awesome! I loved it. How inspiring this is. Thanks for creating this beautiful piece.
Jan
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
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Jan!!!!! Thanks so very much for stopping by!
Comment from peggles
I quite like the clear message, rhyme, and rhythm
I feel this poem and the appropriate presentation you have chosen go very well together
I like it a lot
Well done
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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I quite like the clear message, rhyme, and rhythm
I feel this poem and the appropriate presentation you have chosen go very well together
I like it a lot
Well done
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
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Thank you..
Comment from Denise S
Your poem was quite artistic and I enjoyed reading it. You really know how to take people home with words. I liked the picture you chose too.
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Your poem was quite artistic and I enjoyed reading it. You really know how to take people home with words. I liked the picture you chose too.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
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So do you take my challenge?
Comment from mermaids
I like your theme here, poetry is a painting of words. Poems should paint pictures. I often find this challenging and takes practice. My favorite line is "dare me to vacation in your private cove".
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2012
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I like your theme here, poetry is a painting of words. Poems should paint pictures. I often find this challenging and takes practice. My favorite line is "dare me to vacation in your private cove".
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Comment Written 27-Jan-2012
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Thanks for responding, mermaid. Take the challenge?
