Heaven or Hell.
A Sedoka about where to go and how.34 total reviews
Comment from Kingsland
I don't agree with one word in this poem. But it is well written and a good piece of poetic art. It matters not whether I agree with it content. Only that it is a well written and it is a smoothly delivered piece of poetic art... John
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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I don't agree with one word in this poem. But it is well written and a good piece of poetic art. It matters not whether I agree with it content. Only that it is a well written and it is a smoothly delivered piece of poetic art... John
Comment Written 22-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine. Don't agree with much myself, but do believe there is something more than this earth.
Comment from linsbm
Few words that we must conscientiously act on and keep in our heart always. This is a good reminder for any one to be with God always. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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Few words that we must conscientiously act on and keep in our heart always. This is a good reminder for any one to be with God always. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine.
Comment from Janie King
Well, you have stated it very well...there is a Heaven to gain and a Hell to shun,,we are God's only creation that has a choice. Good job. God bless.
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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Well, you have stated it very well...there is a Heaven to gain and a Hell to shun,,we are God's only creation that has a choice. Good job. God bless.
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine.
Comment from dmoncrief
This poem is well written, following the Sedoka form. The contrast between heaven and hell is obvious, although I might have inserted a line space between the two thoughts. I don't agree with the theology behind your words, but you've expressed your thoughts well.--Denise
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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This poem is well written, following the Sedoka form. The contrast between heaven and hell is obvious, although I might have inserted a line space between the two thoughts. I don't agree with the theology behind your words, but you've expressed your thoughts well.--Denise
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
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Thanks so much for your kind review,Take care and have a lovely weekend, Ine. I don't agree very much with the contents myself. Just believe in something and have been baptised at 40 years old Protestant.
