Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "The promise given"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from stephenie khan
really nice...your images and your poetry is very similar to what I write about...I write about religious faith as well...and spiritualism....i think you do very well.I like your contrasting images...You must have been writing for a long time...God bless you steffy
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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really nice...your images and your poetry is very similar to what I write about...I write about religious faith as well...and spiritualism....i think you do very well.I like your contrasting images...You must have been writing for a long time...God bless you steffy
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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Hi steffy i started writing about a year ago after a lost love but thank you for the review
Comment from pugrpoems
You did a fine job of defining the qualities of humanity. This is very unique, and stimulating. It has good qualities of clarity, tone, and message. Great job!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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You did a fine job of defining the qualities of humanity. This is very unique, and stimulating. It has good qualities of clarity, tone, and message. Great job!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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thank you again for reading
Comment from knowledge
Very good buddy. Reminds me of the Scripture "Putting on the armor of God". Well written poetry. I enjoyed it.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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Very good buddy. Reminds me of the Scripture "Putting on the armor of God". Well written poetry. I enjoyed it.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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thanks again my friend for the review
Comment from jlsavell
deepwater, you can truly tell this is a writing from the heart. Very well composed with great metaphorical value. TRULY IMPRESSIVE. An excellent free verse I would recommend to other..well done..jlsavell
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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deepwater, you can truly tell this is a writing from the heart. Very well composed with great metaphorical value. TRULY IMPRESSIVE. An excellent free verse I would recommend to other..well done..jlsavell
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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thank you Jlsavell for this review
Comment from Raul GF
This poem feels almost like God speaking to us at the beginning of our lives and explaining us the reason of why he had give us each part in our body, the good use he expects us to give, so when the time comes we return the borrowed merchandise in an acceptable state.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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This poem feels almost like God speaking to us at the beginning of our lives and explaining us the reason of why he had give us each part in our body, the good use he expects us to give, so when the time comes we return the borrowed merchandise in an acceptable state.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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never did look at it that way Charlatan still thank you for your review
Comment from connied
I like the metaphor here--if we were all that strong!!
the reality is that we are not--we need to be reminded of these lofty virtues on a daily basis especially in this crazy, disillusioned world we live in.
keep writing,
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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I like the metaphor here--if we were all that strong!!
the reality is that we are not--we need to be reminded of these lofty virtues on a daily basis especially in this crazy, disillusioned world we live in.
keep writing,
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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thanks again my friend for this review
Comment from seewhatimwritingnow
How beautifully you have described the promise of all that which makes up our body and soul. Very creative with an great message. Thanks so much for sharing. Betty
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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How beautifully you have described the promise of all that which makes up our body and soul. Very creative with an great message. Thanks so much for sharing. Betty
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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your most welcome and thank you for your review
Comment from adellatricci
The flow of your poem is nice and the theme an important truth! We do make promises that take faith, sacifice and strength.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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The flow of your poem is nice and the theme an important truth! We do make promises that take faith, sacifice and strength.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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thank you for your review
Comment from miss joyce
The soul, the illusive butterfly so frail without the heart and mind} A very moving illustration of commitment not complete. This is beautiful with strong imagery in the tools we use to uphold that promise.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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The soul, the illusive butterfly so frail without the heart and mind} A very moving illustration of commitment not complete. This is beautiful with strong imagery in the tools we use to uphold that promise.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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Thank you Miss Joyce for your comments and the nice review Gary
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It was a great pleasure!
Comment from jadapenn
Once again a reminder of the spiritual functions of different parts of our being. We should make use, and not abuse the promise each of these give, to fully reap the benefits so richly intended. This is what I draw from your message.
I enjoyed the read. luv jada
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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Once again a reminder of the spiritual functions of different parts of our being. We should make use, and not abuse the promise each of these give, to fully reap the benefits so richly intended. This is what I draw from your message.
I enjoyed the read. luv jada
Comment Written 18-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2010
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thank you jada for your review
