Tantalizing Eyes
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Chapter 3 Part 2"Dishonesty VS Love. Which will win?
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Comment from c_lucas
This is a very well written story. Steven obviously is not aware of the South American Culture. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Pm sent.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2009
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This is a very well written story. Steven obviously is not aware of the South American Culture. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Pm sent.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2009
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Thank you for your review. Your continued support is very appreciated.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from RebelRose
Another good chapter. Very well written. The imagery is good and the story is very interesting. I have a problem with getting the italics to work, but your's worked nicely.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2009
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Another good chapter. Very well written. The imagery is good and the story is very interesting. I have a problem with getting the italics to work, but your's worked nicely.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2009
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Thank you. It's taken me a year of practice, but they have worked in the last two posts, so I think I have it now. I hope I just didn't jinx it.
Comment from nora arjuna
Oh steven is such a modest man. So we're having an arranged marriage here as well, and a virgin for that. That's what I've been telling my readers, when they thought it's part of my culture only. Now I'm curious on what steven will come up with. No nits to report.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2009
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Oh steven is such a modest man. So we're having an arranged marriage here as well, and a virgin for that. That's what I've been telling my readers, when they thought it's part of my culture only. Now I'm curious on what steven will come up with. No nits to report.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2009
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Thankyou for your review. Your review always means so much to me.
Comment from NightWriter
"Chapter 3 Part 2" is another captivating chapter. Very fluid and moving. Strong dialogue and nice descriptive narration. I hate those pre-arranged marages, especially when the guy's a pig! No spaggies. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2009
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"Chapter 3 Part 2" is another captivating chapter. Very fluid and moving. Strong dialogue and nice descriptive narration. I hate those pre-arranged marages, especially when the guy's a pig! No spaggies. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2009
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Laidy
this was a great write. i thought that this chapter was real good. this story is getting real good. i liked reading and i have nothing negative to write about your chapter.
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2009
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this was a great write. i thought that this chapter was real good. this story is getting real good. i liked reading and i have nothing negative to write about your chapter.
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Comment Written 07-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2009
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your continued support.
