Time Portal
A journey back in time to an event.33 total reviews
Comment from Gramma Kathy
I read this piece twice. When I first started reading, I was expecting the usual flippant fantasy about time travel. This is so much more.
You have taken a trip to Calvary, and now I have journeyed with you. I like the way you use elements of fantasy (time portal, being in an unknown place with strangers) to tell the Good News of salvation.
This is well written and moving. Thank you for sharing it.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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I read this piece twice. When I first started reading, I was expecting the usual flippant fantasy about time travel. This is so much more.
You have taken a trip to Calvary, and now I have journeyed with you. I like the way you use elements of fantasy (time portal, being in an unknown place with strangers) to tell the Good News of salvation.
This is well written and moving. Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2009
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Thank you for reading this piece twice and the great review. I know God is pleased since He wrote this! May God Bless
Comment from Undaunted
i remember in my senior year of high school(a long time ago btw), one of the questions on my history final was describe the one event in history you would like to travel back in time to view and why. my answer was when they nailed Jesus to the cross. you might want to spell check though. i believe it's spelled desperation, not desparation. you really brought out that even surrounded by all the despair He was still the Rock, and in total peace. well done...
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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i remember in my senior year of high school(a long time ago btw), one of the questions on my history final was describe the one event in history you would like to travel back in time to view and why. my answer was when they nailed Jesus to the cross. you might want to spell check though. i believe it's spelled desperation, not desparation. you really brought out that even surrounded by all the despair He was still the Rock, and in total peace. well done...
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Thank you for catching the spelling mistake. Thank you for reviewing and yes, He is our Rock. God bless
Comment from chrisweigand
Wow, powerful, unexpected yet pleasant suprise. What a wonderful feeling knowing that He is smiling at me and loved me enough to give up His life.
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Wow, powerful, unexpected yet pleasant suprise. What a wonderful feeling knowing that He is smiling at me and loved me enough to give up His life.
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Thank you so much for your review. Sounds like we are sisters in Christ. Let's keep on getting the Word out...time is short. God Bless
