The Love We Shared
For 64 years including high school.42 total reviews
Comment from Michael Cassar
A heartthrob poem. Life's love dream recited by soft tender lines. Your eyes remain glued in the passing of time...sixty first year. Yet, The poet keeps her alive with his choice of last verse
"She went home and left me here."
Beautiful love memory embracing togetherness into eternity.
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A heartthrob poem. Life's love dream recited by soft tender lines. Your eyes remain glued in the passing of time...sixty first year. Yet, The poet keeps her alive with his choice of last verse
"She went home and left me here."
Beautiful love memory embracing togetherness into eternity.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
Comment from lancellot
This is the most beautiful love story and love poem I've come across in a long, long time. The rhymes and feelings are perfect. You really poured your soul into this. Do not change one word.
I regret I can only give it one six. I shall remember this, should it come up in the monthly booth. It should.
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This is the most beautiful love story and love poem I've come across in a long, long time. The rhymes and feelings are perfect. You really poured your soul into this. Do not change one word.
I regret I can only give it one six. I shall remember this, should it come up in the monthly booth. It should.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
A love that strong continues even after one has passed. She will be waiting for you when God says it's your time to come home. I too wish everyone could find and keep a love that strong, I have, and it is wonderful. Your poem is fabulous, and I really enjoyed reading it. Although tinged with sadness, it was a lovely start to my day. :) Sandra xxx
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A love that strong continues even after one has passed. She will be waiting for you when God says it's your time to come home. I too wish everyone could find and keep a love that strong, I have, and it is wonderful. Your poem is fabulous, and I really enjoyed reading it. Although tinged with sadness, it was a lovely start to my day. :) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
Comment from Sanku
You must be a chosen one to have such a perfect partnership.Sixty years!
This is a rare blessing and I can understand the loneliness you are bound to feel .But the memories are there for you ...
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You must be a chosen one to have such a perfect partnership.Sixty years!
This is a rare blessing and I can understand the loneliness you are bound to feel .But the memories are there for you ...
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I'm so sorry you lost your long and devoted love in the 64th year of your time together. This is a sweet love poem in her memory. The text is a nice size. The message of love is crystal clear. Your visual is a photo of a lovely looking lady.
I would drop the first line of the poem down one space for better balance in the poetry box. What was her name?
Thanks for sharing.
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I'm so sorry you lost your long and devoted love in the 64th year of your time together. This is a sweet love poem in her memory. The text is a nice size. The message of love is crystal clear. Your visual is a photo of a lovely looking lady.
I would drop the first line of the poem down one space for better balance in the poetry box. What was her name?
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You have great memories to keep your love alive here Willie and my heart goes out to you in your grief as you lost the love of your life. You shared everything together and your words here are endearing, great rhymes and sentiment, love Dolly x
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You have great memories to keep your love alive here Willie and my heart goes out to you in your grief as you lost the love of your life. You shared everything together and your words here are endearing, great rhymes and sentiment, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Oh what a beautiful love poem tracing your joyful love and life with her. How blessed to have such a love throughout your life. Excellent writing.
Wendy
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Oh what a beautiful love poem tracing your joyful love and life with her. How blessed to have such a love throughout your life. Excellent writing.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
Comment from Douglas Goff
61 years with the love of your life. You are a lucky man Willie.
This was a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing a peek into your life with us.
Keep up the wonderful work.
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61 years with the love of your life. You are a lucky man Willie.
This was a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing a peek into your life with us.
Keep up the wonderful work.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your love/tribute poem to your beloved
wife, Willie. I enjoyed reading it. Her picture is beautiful. Your words
were straight form your heart and told a special love story. The
memories you and she made over the 64 years were awesome I
believe. Congratulations on you and she finding each other as soul
mates.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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You did a great job with your love/tribute poem to your beloved
wife, Willie. I enjoyed reading it. Her picture is beautiful. Your words
were straight form your heart and told a special love story. The
memories you and she made over the 64 years were awesome I
believe. Congratulations on you and she finding each other as soul
mates.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
What a beautiful love story! You could feel the love in your words. I enjoyed your rhymes. I am also a rhymer. I especially loved the verse about carrying her books. I could just picture that.
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What a beautiful love story! You could feel the love in your words. I enjoyed your rhymes. I am also a rhymer. I especially loved the verse about carrying her books. I could just picture that.
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
