Hide me in your shadow
A poem35 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I thought your refrain was particularly lyrical. Six quatrains rhymed and metered here that made Sunday evening in the United States calmer. I only noticed the tiniest of fixes: a if your plenty turned to lack.
I think you meant: and if your plenty turned to lack
or else
as if your plenty turned to lack.
Nice post.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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I thought your refrain was particularly lyrical. Six quatrains rhymed and metered here that made Sunday evening in the United States calmer. I only noticed the tiniest of fixes: a if your plenty turned to lack.
I think you meant: and if your plenty turned to lack
or else
as if your plenty turned to lack.
Nice post.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thanks Crystie, for these super comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sally Law
Oh, yes! My hiding place in the figurative and actual storms of life, my Lord Jesus Christ! My, how I have taken refuge there lately. I'm sure you do too. Thank you for the encouraging words.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Oh, yes! My hiding place in the figurative and actual storms of life, my Lord Jesus Christ! My, how I have taken refuge there lately. I'm sure you do too. Thank you for the encouraging words.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Thanks Sally, for these super comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very well written. For some reason, the first paragraph reminded me of Jonah. I think we all feel a lot of this at different points in our lives.
Well done. Keep up the good work.
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
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Very well written. For some reason, the first paragraph reminded me of Jonah. I think we all feel a lot of this at different points in our lives.
Well done. Keep up the good work.
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
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Thanks Douglas for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
Loved your poem, Roy! And it speaks to us about the restoration of relationships. It's hard between humans. But because Jesus restored our relationship with Him, He will help us mend relationships with others.
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Loved your poem, Roy! And it speaks to us about the restoration of relationships. It's hard between humans. But because Jesus restored our relationship with Him, He will help us mend relationships with others.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
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Thanks so much Helen, for your fantastic comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a beautiful poem. I could almost hear it being sung by the choir in church. The flow of your poem is excellent. A wonderful rhyme scheme. A beautiful read.
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I thought this was a beautiful poem. I could almost hear it being sung by the choir in church. The flow of your poem is excellent. A wonderful rhyme scheme. A beautiful read.
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2022
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Thanks Michael, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
