Cowboy talk to God
C0wboy and horse praying.52 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your poem, Willie. I loved the
picture--esp the horse with its bowed head. Your words
sounded just like an ol' cowboy would have spoken. There was
smooth flow and great details. The font worked well, too, as
well as the rhyme. The message was clear and truthful.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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You did a great job with your poem, Willie. I loved the
picture--esp the horse with its bowed head. Your words
sounded just like an ol' cowboy would have spoken. There was
smooth flow and great details. The font worked well, too, as
well as the rhyme. The message was clear and truthful.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
Comment from susand3022
Hi Willie,
I really liked this Cowboy conversation with God. It was really sweet.
I found that the poem had a couple of rough patches in the meter, but it didn't really take away from the poem at all.
Nicely done
Susan :)
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Hi Willie,
I really liked this Cowboy conversation with God. It was really sweet.
I found that the poem had a couple of rough patches in the meter, but it didn't really take away from the poem at all.
Nicely done
Susan :)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this cowboy and his horse's prayer with us. Since the cowboy and his horse have probably been together for a while, I'm sure the horse has the same thoughts. This was a good read.
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Thank you for sharing this cowboy and his horse's prayer with us. Since the cowboy and his horse have probably been together for a while, I'm sure the horse has the same thoughts. This was a good read.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is a very moving talk of the old cowboy to God. Loved the use of a Western dialect. Terrific imagery and visuals.
Loved this:
Just a little more time is all I ask.
With your mercy, that shouldn't be a big task.
When I leave this old world I love so much,
Take me to a place where's there's horses and such.
Very moving, loved it, great job.
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This is a very moving talk of the old cowboy to God. Loved the use of a Western dialect. Terrific imagery and visuals.
Loved this:
Just a little more time is all I ask.
With your mercy, that shouldn't be a big task.
When I leave this old world I love so much,
Take me to a place where's there's horses and such.
Very moving, loved it, great job.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
Comment from Boogienights
I love this, especially when you speak in the voice of an old cowboy. For me, I got a feeling of peace reading it, I really do hope there is a heaven like that. Full of sentiment and great imagery, thanks for sharing.
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I love this, especially when you speak in the voice of an old cowboy. For me, I got a feeling of peace reading it, I really do hope there is a heaven like that. Full of sentiment and great imagery, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
I really enjoyed your poem. I think your words perfectly portrayed what a cowboy feeling his age creep up on him would hope and pray for. He sounded so humble. The artwork was a great fit.
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I really enjoyed your poem. I think your words perfectly portrayed what a cowboy feeling his age creep up on him would hope and pray for. He sounded so humble. The artwork was a great fit.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
Comment from nomi338
There is little hope for the man too proud to bow his head in prayerful acknowledgement of the inarguable fact that there is not only a true living God, but there is a God that loves him, cares about what is important to him and who is pleased that he recognizes this.
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There is little hope for the man too proud to bow his head in prayerful acknowledgement of the inarguable fact that there is not only a true living God, but there is a God that loves him, cares about what is important to him and who is pleased that he recognizes this.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
Comment from Sherry SG
I really enjoyed reading this. I loved the simple, sincere plea in the poem. The rhyme and meter and flow are all great.
The font is quite apt but some people may find it a bit hard to read.
I have never been to Texas and am not American either, so whatever I know about the Cowboy life is through American movies and books. This poem touched me. You have my 6 stars for this.
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I really enjoyed reading this. I loved the simple, sincere plea in the poem. The rhyme and meter and flow are all great.
The font is quite apt but some people may find it a bit hard to read.
I have never been to Texas and am not American either, so whatever I know about the Cowboy life is through American movies and books. This poem touched me. You have my 6 stars for this.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
The voice of the poem is totally convincing. The reader can 'hear' the cowboy's humble plea. The font makes it read and look like an authentic letter. The meter and rhyming scheme lend it musicality; you just need to
get out your guitar!
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The voice of the poem is totally convincing. The reader can 'hear' the cowboy's humble plea. The font makes it read and look like an authentic letter. The meter and rhyming scheme lend it musicality; you just need to
get out your guitar!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Willie
A perfect poem for the image Well constructed and presented good rhymes and meter
Saddle there is s a range to explore
Cheers Christine
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Hi Willie
A perfect poem for the image Well constructed and presented good rhymes and meter
Saddle there is s a range to explore
Cheers Christine
Comment Written 05-Jan-2023
