I Learned from Charlie
Charlie was a School Classmate34 total reviews
Comment from HarryT
I believe this story merits five stars though there are a few minor points I suggest the author consider:
1. I don't (know) why, but it always brought a smile. Add know.
2. to my recollection, (did he ever mention) horses.
3. a show horse judge. Delete of some sort.
Like the insight articulated in the last two paragraph.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I believe this story merits five stars though there are a few minor points I suggest the author consider:
1. I don't (know) why, but it always brought a smile. Add know.
2. to my recollection, (did he ever mention) horses.
3. a show horse judge. Delete of some sort.
Like the insight articulated in the last two paragraph.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Edits have been done!!! Thank you very much for pointing those errors out.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a terrific entry for the contest, with a very important message we should all remember. It is hard to really "know" someone unless you live in intimate circumstances. And even then we may not know the full person. I made just a couple of bery picky notes about the writing.
gotten a degree from Northwestern State -- better as earned a degree
when notified by other classmates, of his death, -- no need for comma after classmates
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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This is a terrific entry for the contest, with a very important message we should all remember. It is hard to really "know" someone unless you live in intimate circumstances. And even then we may not know the full person. I made just a couple of bery picky notes about the writing.
gotten a degree from Northwestern State -- better as earned a degree
when notified by other classmates, of his death, -- no need for comma after classmates
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Edits will be made. thanks for the input.
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You are welcome.
Comment from papa55mike
I've often wondered what all of my old friends are doing or if they're still alive. How would they look at me today? What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I've often wondered what all of my old friends are doing or if they're still alive. How would they look at me today? What a wonderfully written story.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I appreciate your time in reading and commenting. I am humbled by the six star rating. thank you so very much.
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, this is very nice. I am sure the members of FanStory will appreciate having a old friend that has changed over the years and the feeling of seeing how they became more than they seem when they were young.
You provided a good deal of backstory on Charlies.
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Hmm, this is very nice. I am sure the members of FanStory will appreciate having a old friend that has changed over the years and the feeling of seeing how they became more than they seem when they were young.
You provided a good deal of backstory on Charlies.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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thank you for reading and commenting.
