I wonder now
Admitting to a nursing home.32 total reviews
Comment from djsaxon
Wow. This is heart wrenchingly honest. So few people (poets) are brave enough to do that. It's not just an emotional six pack. The write is very strong. Incisive throughout. No frills. You simply cut straight to the chase. Blessings - DJ
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Wow. This is heart wrenchingly honest. So few people (poets) are brave enough to do that. It's not just an emotional six pack. The write is very strong. Incisive throughout. No frills. You simply cut straight to the chase. Blessings - DJ
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thank you again for your kindness.
Mary
Comment from Raul1
I like the repetition you have written in your poem. This poem is like a story itself. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thanks for sharing!
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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I like the repetition you have written in your poem. This poem is like a story itself. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thanks for sharing!
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your review and kind comments.
Take care and stay safe.
Mary
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You're welcome. Same to you! :)
