A Compilation of Short stories
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Comment from Ben B.
An interesting flash fiction story. Honestly though, the narrator's story seems a bit vague to me. Did she really die? Was she beaten to death for real? So many questions.
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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An interesting flash fiction story. Honestly though, the narrator's story seems a bit vague to me. Did she really die? Was she beaten to death for real? So many questions.
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much. But that's the whole point. It's up to the reader to deduce what happened. I'm glad you have all those questions. I have achieved what I aimed for. I think it's a 'he' though. Ulla:)))
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your story. I like your story very much. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck on the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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I have enjoyed reading your story. I like your story very much. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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Thanks a lot, Raul. I so appreciate it. Ulla:)))
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You have an excellent contest entry here. It brings out the curiousity in me and I want/need more information. Please turn this into a novel. I can't wait to read it. I wish you the very best luck with this contest, but I doubt you will need it.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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You have an excellent contest entry here. It brings out the curiousity in me and I want/need more information. Please turn this into a novel. I can't wait to read it. I wish you the very best luck with this contest, but I doubt you will need it.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, Barbara, and please do forgive my late reply. I've been so busy of late. Ulla x
Comment from royowen
What an interesting post dear Ulla, yes, you've captured perfectly that feeling of moving from one reality to another, and you have done it very well indeed. Great entry, good luck Ulla, blessings. Roy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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What an interesting post dear Ulla, yes, you've captured perfectly that feeling of moving from one reality to another, and you have done it very well indeed. Great entry, good luck Ulla, blessings. Roy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much, Roy.I so appreciate your great review. Ulla:)))
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Most welcome Ulla
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word flash fiction story, The Death of a Spy, has the right word count and leaves me very curious as to what is actually happening here. The sense of despair, to slight happiness, and back to despair is totally dependent on the title.
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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This one-hundred-word flash fiction story, The Death of a Spy, has the right word count and leaves me very curious as to what is actually happening here. The sense of despair, to slight happiness, and back to despair is totally dependent on the title.
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
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Yes, I believe it is, dependent on the title, that is. I'm glad it left you curious. That is the whole point. He died, didn't he, or? Thanks for a great review. Ulla:)))
