(haiku) a slow unfolding
The journey to freedom...23 total reviews
Comment from Beverly A McBride
Beautiful! The illustration is perfect. Lovely poem, excellent execution. I like the whole thing, the color, font, the presentation. Nice work! Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Beautiful! The illustration is perfect. Lovely poem, excellent execution. I like the whole thing, the color, font, the presentation. Nice work! Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Thank you for your rave review!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Metamorphisis is quite impressive cycle! To go through all of those rather ugly stage and then come out as a beautiful butterfly. Don't you marvel at how God made every thing, every plant, animal and even insects with all of their needs are taken care of without help? It just happens as the Lord intended it to happen. Our God is an awesome God! I liked the part about 'waiting in the wings.' I also liked the picture of all those butterflies hanging upside down waiting for their wings to dry out so they can fly.
Parry "Quack!"
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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Metamorphisis is quite impressive cycle! To go through all of those rather ugly stage and then come out as a beautiful butterfly. Don't you marvel at how God made every thing, every plant, animal and even insects with all of their needs are taken care of without help? It just happens as the Lord intended it to happen. Our God is an awesome God! I liked the part about 'waiting in the wings.' I also liked the picture of all those butterflies hanging upside down waiting for their wings to dry out so they can fly.
Parry "Quack!"
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Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2020
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Hi Parry - I hope you are feeling much better now. Thank you for reviewing my poems!
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LisaMay, you're welcome for the review! I am feeling much better, thank you.
Parry "Quack!"
Comment from Pantygynt
Now that is what I call a first class satori line. Take a well known expression, give it a whole new meaning simultaneously retaining the original meaning. Very, very clever.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Now that is what I call a first class satori line. Take a well known expression, give it a whole new meaning simultaneously retaining the original meaning. Very, very clever.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2020
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
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Thank you for verifying the appropriateness of that line for a satori. I got quite excited when I thought how I could use it. Now I am excited about your 6 star rating.
