Morning Crisp Air
Haiku Contest Entry 4/7/521 total reviews
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
I think you wrote a fantastic haiku! It really made me think and visualize what was going on in the haiku. I enjoy how you can use such short words to describe the steps. I can tell that it is early in the morning in the haiku. Great writing!
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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I think you wrote a fantastic haiku! It really made me think and visualize what was going on in the haiku. I enjoy how you can use such short words to describe the steps. I can tell that it is early in the morning in the haiku. Great writing!
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Jeffrey, the goal of haiku is to make the reader visualize the scene so I've done my job.... lol
