The Lighter Side of Things
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "A Skewed Perception?"We all need to smile, especially these days.
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Comment from Michele Harber
This is hysterical and oh so relatable (considering I had a bad day today and consoled myself with much of a large bag of M&Ms). I adore the way the words became more slurred and took on more of a lisp the drunker the speaker got. It added a wonderful note of humor, without taking away from the rhythm and rhyme of the poem. Overall, an excellent job.
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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This is hysterical and oh so relatable (considering I had a bad day today and consoled myself with much of a large bag of M&Ms). I adore the way the words became more slurred and took on more of a lisp the drunker the speaker got. It added a wonderful note of humor, without taking away from the rhythm and rhyme of the poem. Overall, an excellent job.
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much indeed fellow poet. I'm weally happy you coudl welate to my poem of shloshednesh...mefinksh I should shtop...hic
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Either that, or invite me along.
FYI, I'm starting to recognize your style. After writing the review, I checked your profile page to see if this were yours, and lo and behold ?. My only problem with your poem: it's very likely to beat out mine!! Seriously, Chris, this is hysterical, and I'll be all for it if you win this contest. Good luck.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Great job on this humorous poem! I barely even taste the stuff -- wine, that is -- now chocolate, that's a whole other story! But I hear that they go very well together.
The cops in your neighborhood are really not doing a very good job of community policing, if they won't even come in to share the bottle with you... LOL! You did a very good job of affecting a drunken lisp in your poem. But hey, I unnershtan -- nobody's perfick!
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Great job on this humorous poem! I barely even taste the stuff -- wine, that is -- now chocolate, that's a whole other story! But I hear that they go very well together.
The cops in your neighborhood are really not doing a very good job of community policing, if they won't even come in to share the bottle with you... LOL! You did a very good job of affecting a drunken lisp in your poem. But hey, I unnershtan -- nobody's perfick!
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thanksh for your fun review! I'm glad you unnershtan...its sho hard to convinth shome that I definitely am not perfick lol!
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You're sho verrry rekkum. Many blesshings :-)
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many bleshingsh to your fine shelf xo
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Lol big shmile!
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hehehehe, ah dear...you mush come for a yarn and a cuppa tea, while I shcoff m'wine...hic
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Aye, but that chalklet'll lead ye down the primrosh path, sure 'nuff, so mind yer indulgence in them Valentimes leftoffers! I tell ye, 'tish our waistlines wots inna wee bitta perrril.
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'N ah'll be there for a cuppa, straightaway. Blessings, my friend. Thanks for the laughs :-D
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My waishline pashed perrrrilll a loooong time 'go...don ave one an'more...
Tea is promptly at 10am. It'd be wine o'clock somewhere in the world lol
