Starlight
A Lune24 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
An excellent topic for a lune poem, your poem has nice imagery
and good touch of alliteration.
The picture is a perfect match to the excellent poem.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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An excellent topic for a lune poem, your poem has nice imagery
and good touch of alliteration.
The picture is a perfect match to the excellent poem.
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this and the beautiful, colorful, and very descriptive and well placed wording you've used. That first line is a stroke of brilliance. This is really good and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done. You should do well with this in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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I like this and the beautiful, colorful, and very descriptive and well placed wording you've used. That first line is a stroke of brilliance. This is really good and I enjoyed reading this well written work. Well done. You should do well with this in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Thanks for those encouraging words zanya
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author, what a beautiful Lune poem. I love the words you used to depict the images of the stars in the sky... or was it the nature of the gemstones??? lol or was it both?? ;) well done :)
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Hello Author, what a beautiful Lune poem. I love the words you used to depict the images of the stars in the sky... or was it the nature of the gemstones??? lol or was it both?? ;) well done :)
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Mackenzie Schmidt
Your lune poem Starlight was simple and sweet. It seemed to fit the proper syllable structure. The picture you used fit the theme of the lune although it wasn't needed because the imagery was very well done. The only recommendation would make is to classify the poem as nature instead of general.
Good Luck with Contest
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Your lune poem Starlight was simple and sweet. It seemed to fit the proper syllable structure. The picture you used fit the theme of the lune although it wasn't needed because the imagery was very well done. The only recommendation would make is to classify the poem as nature instead of general.
Good Luck with Contest
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Comment Written 18-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020
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Great review zanya
