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Saying Goodbye to Phyllis

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a book of tributes

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Comment from Pam (respa)
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-A lovely image and
tribute to Phyllis, Tony.
-I am sure Phyllis would
be very pleased with all
of your references, especially
about the almond tree.
-She is probably saying,
"That's a pretty good idea;
why didn't I think of that?!"
-I did not know her well, but
I have been reading some things
in her portfolio and what others
are saying.
-I agree with you about a sense
of humor, and I am sure she
is enjoying all that people are
writing and sharing, and is
in a place of peace.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
    Thank you for reading my tribute to Phyllis and for your kind comments. Best wishes, Tony
reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Jan-2020
    You are very welcome, Tony.
Comment from Pantygynt
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This is a most delightful tribute to one of FanStory's best known contributors. I will miss that ridiculous penguin family in particular. They were a long time favourite of mine.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
    Thank you for reading my tribute to Phyllis and for your kind comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from bob cullen
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What a beautiful tribute. I didn't even know Phyllis was unwell. I guess I've neglected my friends on Fanstory these past few months. Phyllis was kind enough to offer a number of reviews on my work and they were always much appreciated. Fanstory has lost a fine member. Mt thoughts are with her family

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
    Thank you for reading my tribute to Phyllis and for your kind comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Tony, this is one of the best eulogies I have read on FS for one of our members who has died. What a lovely thought, to be turned into an almond tree after death - if only. Beautifully worded piece and such a lovely picture. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
    Thank you for reading my tribute to Phyllis and for your kind comments. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from Ricky1024
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"The Almond Tree."
I really enjoyed reading this it was very interesting and well-written
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
    Thank you for reading my tribute to Phyllis and for your kind comments. Best wishes, Tony
reply by Ricky1024 on 10-Jan-2020
    My pleasure.
    Doctor Ricky 1924
Comment from Bobby Jo
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I started really writing after I lost my mom. Writing leaves a legacy to my kids. Granted if they take time to even read it. May she rest in peace, and may her writing live on

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
    Sorry to hear about the loss of your mom. Writing can be therapeutic, and a wonderful legacy for your kids.
Comment from Sankey
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Hi, this is good which Phyllis are you talking about? Do I know her in FS? Well done. I need to get back to stuff real soon. So much money coming out of my ears.

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 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
    Long-time member, Phyllis Stewart, passed away recently after a long illness. A book of condolences has been initiated by lyenochka.
reply by Sankey on 10-Jan-2020
    OK I was not aware. I enjoyed reading her stuff. I had a feeling that was who you were posting on. Sad.