A Compilation of Short stories
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Comment from brenda bickers
Oh Ulla,
This is good. I wish I had a six left.
I like the vivid description of how the scream terrified those who would have heard it. You don't give to much away and let the reader use their imagination. This was quite un-nerving.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Brenda.x
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Oh Ulla,
This is good. I wish I had a six left.
I like the vivid description of how the scream terrified those who would have heard it. You don't give to much away and let the reader use their imagination. This was quite un-nerving.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Brenda.x
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much, Brenda. It's my first ever Haloween/horror story ever. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the virtual six. I had fun writing it. Ulla xx
