Soaring
Short 15 Syllables28 total reviews
Comment from Gail Denham
What a picture - what a poem. They fit hand in glove. I like the feeling of your poem. It's soothing. Beautiful to see the moon over the ocean. A rare sight actually as often the clouds come in at that time. We see a full moon over the lake where we camp. it is a peaceful embrace.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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What a picture - what a poem. They fit hand in glove. I like the feeling of your poem. It's soothing. Beautiful to see the moon over the ocean. A rare sight actually as often the clouds come in at that time. We see a full moon over the lake where we camp. it is a peaceful embrace.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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I love writing about the moon and how peaceful it can be to sit and gaze at it. Thanks so much Gail.
Melissa
Comment from Mark Valentine
Love it - it really sets a mood. There's something about both the moon and the ocean that has the effect of making us feel small - in a good way - it makes our worries seem small - the notion of them embracing us highlights that feeling - and that it all happens at dusk just adds to the quiet and still vibe of the poem. It really makes the most of its fifteen syllables.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Love it - it really sets a mood. There's something about both the moon and the ocean that has the effect of making us feel small - in a good way - it makes our worries seem small - the notion of them embracing us highlights that feeling - and that it all happens at dusk just adds to the quiet and still vibe of the poem. It really makes the most of its fifteen syllables.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Hi Mark. Thank you for this wonderful review. I feel the same way about the moon and sea.
Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all your syllables--and personification--in this lovely poem. I relied on the picture to figure out the part about the
embrace.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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You have made excellent use of all your syllables--and personification--in this lovely poem. I relied on the picture to figure out the part about the
embrace.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Thank you Janice. I am glad you enjoyed this one.
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
Cool photo and perfectly golden, full moon set within the tree. A fine entry for the fifteen syllable poetry contest. You know astronomy is my hobby, right? That is . . . besides writing.
Ready for the contest win.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Cool photo and perfectly golden, full moon set within the tree. A fine entry for the fifteen syllable poetry contest. You know astronomy is my hobby, right? That is . . . besides writing.
Ready for the contest win.
Sending you my best today as well,
Sal xo
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Hi Sal and good morning. I did not know you enjoyed studying astronomy. Way to go!! Thanks for the comments and review.
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A unique picture and a unique and ambient write here Melissa, I wish you luck with the contest, this is a fine presentation, best wishes . . . love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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A unique picture and a unique and ambient write here Melissa, I wish you luck with the contest, this is a fine presentation, best wishes . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Hi Dolly. Thank you!!
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
A lot simpler, but just as beautiful as a redoubled rondeau! I love the artwork, too! Should be a winner in the contest. Peaceful embrace...that's what we need at the end of a hectic day...
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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A lot simpler, but just as beautiful as a redoubled rondeau! I love the artwork, too! Should be a winner in the contest. Peaceful embrace...that's what we need at the end of a hectic day...
Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Thanks so much, June.
Melissa
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
At the dusk of the evening, everything appears quiet, calm is the sea, and pale is the moon, tranquility is there around, and peaceful embrace is enjoyable in the surrounding; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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At the dusk of the evening, everything appears quiet, calm is the sea, and pale is the moon, tranquility is there around, and peaceful embrace is enjoyable in the surrounding; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Thanks. I am so glad you enjoyed it!!
Melissa
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sugarray. First I will comment on the picture. It is a remarkable image. Now I will comment on your 15 syllable poem. I could visualize that picture without seeing it because of the power of your words. Excellent. Robert
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Hello Sugarray. First I will comment on the picture. It is a remarkable image. Now I will comment on your 15 syllable poem. I could visualize that picture without seeing it because of the power of your words. Excellent. Robert
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2019
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Hello Robert. Thank you very much for your encouraging review. I am glad you liked it!!
Melissa
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You're welcome.
