Pinnacle of Insight
Just the level of introversion that seeps out forming words62 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
this a profound piece of poetry dear jlr! I like your philosophical sentiment because it carries a message for personal
growth.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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this a profound piece of poetry dear jlr! I like your philosophical sentiment because it carries a message for personal
growth.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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And again, my sincerest appreciation, it is so helpful to have the encouraging words to keep writing.
Comment from WryWriter
I like the metaphor of the pinnacles. The artwork choice was perfect. Self-improvement is a mixture of crawling up slippery slopes, sliding back down, and doing it again until somehow you reach the top and slip over to the other side. Excellent work!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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I like the metaphor of the pinnacles. The artwork choice was perfect. Self-improvement is a mixture of crawling up slippery slopes, sliding back down, and doing it again until somehow you reach the top and slip over to the other side. Excellent work!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank for taking the time to read and comment on my work.
Comment from Neonewman
Outstanding! This I can relate to, my friend. I enjoyed this well-crafted piece you have delivered and wish the best in the upcoming voting polls.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Outstanding! This I can relate to, my friend. I enjoyed this well-crafted piece you have delivered and wish the best in the upcoming voting polls.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 22-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Thank for taking the time to read and comment on my work.
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My pleasure
Comment from lyenochka
Really enjoyed reading your philosophical acrostic poem. At first, I was thinking of the freedom in retirement of no longer dealing with difficult personalities. But your poem shows the narrator willing to "crawl up slippery slopes" and re-evaluate relationships opening the mind to continue the working on reaching new pinnacles of being human. Fun pun at the end.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Really enjoyed reading your philosophical acrostic poem. At first, I was thinking of the freedom in retirement of no longer dealing with difficult personalities. But your poem shows the narrator willing to "crawl up slippery slopes" and re-evaluate relationships opening the mind to continue the working on reaching new pinnacles of being human. Fun pun at the end.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2019
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Dear reader, you nailed it...Thank for taking the time to read and comment on my work.
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. It has deep emotions and a human feel to it. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I like how you structured this poem. It has deep emotions and a human feel to it. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I thank you for your time and comments!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Ava Wilson
You did a great job with this. I love reading poetry that makes me think and that is exactly what you inspired with this piece. Thank you so much for sharing your writing and I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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You did a great job with this. I love reading poetry that makes me think and that is exactly what you inspired with this piece. Thank you so much for sharing your writing and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I thank you for your time and comments!
Comment from Kingsrookviii
Interesting words.it seems you judge actions, but are noncommital about either dealing with induvuals untill they've acheived or done something that interests you and you're leaving out the "other" part of why this is. Interesting.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Interesting words.it seems you judge actions, but are noncommital about either dealing with induvuals untill they've acheived or done something that interests you and you're leaving out the "other" part of why this is. Interesting.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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IFSJ :)
Comment from jusylee72
Very good illustration of the world with pinnacles and your words flowed well . I enjoyed your honesty and your ability to lay it out, even the part about not being fond of difficult people but being willing to still crawl up difficult , slippery slopes. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Very good illustration of the world with pinnacles and your words flowed well . I enjoyed your honesty and your ability to lay it out, even the part about not being fond of difficult people but being willing to still crawl up difficult , slippery slopes. Nice poem.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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I also thank you for these wonderful words of encouragement
Comment from mmonaghan777
Nailed it! Not only did you achieve the poem design your picture captures powerful imagery and describes every word you wrote. The emotions expressed reach deep and state the truth. Good Luck!
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Nailed it! Not only did you achieve the poem design your picture captures powerful imagery and describes every word you wrote. The emotions expressed reach deep and state the truth. Good Luck!
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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My sincerest thank you! I am so appreciative of all comments and well wishes.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent. I love how the narrative flows. Your breaks from sentence to sentence to accommodate the acrostic format is so well done. Nice pacing and sequence; poem reads well silently and out loud. Last line is a gem. Hugh
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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Excellent. I love how the narrative flows. Your breaks from sentence to sentence to accommodate the acrostic format is so well done. Nice pacing and sequence; poem reads well silently and out loud. Last line is a gem. Hugh
Comment Written 21-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2019
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My sincerest thank you for investing the time to read and comment on my work.
