Twins
Just having a twin starts the journey...45 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a worthy contest entry not only using rhyme but Monorhyme as well. Short and sweet manner in which to express the telepathy between twins. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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This is a worthy contest entry not only using rhyme but Monorhyme as well. Short and sweet manner in which to express the telepathy between twins. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thank you your vote and support.
Comment from MsPetra
Though I don't have a twin I get what you are saying here. In giving the words thought it tickles me. It would have been nice to have a twin around.
There isn't anything I would have done differently. I am looking forward to your next offering. I hope it is as witty and thought provoking.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Though I don't have a twin I get what you are saying here. In giving the words thought it tickles me. It would have been nice to have a twin around.
There isn't anything I would have done differently. I am looking forward to your next offering. I hope it is as witty and thought provoking.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Your comments are very much appreciated and I can only hope to improve....
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello this is a decent little poem. Short, simple, and amusing. My daughter is pregnant with twins, I wonder if when I visit them I will experience that, I guess I'll find out. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Hello this is a decent little poem. Short, simple, and amusing. My daughter is pregnant with twins, I wonder if when I visit them I will experience that, I guess I'll find out. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Congratulations! You certainly will experience uniqueness in their lifetime.
Comment from TPAC
This write make you wonder exactly who said finding this particular write a witty conveyance captivating darts of reality delivered excellently in my given opinion.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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This write make you wonder exactly who said finding this particular write a witty conveyance captivating darts of reality delivered excellently in my given opinion.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thank you kindly.
Comment from Six-Star Writer
I said, "I said." What did I say I said? That I said I said? It must have been something I thought I said, but didn't say I said. Said it? Sure I said It. Or I wouldn't have thought I said what I think I thought I said. Well said!
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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I said, "I said." What did I say I said? That I said I said? It must have been something I thought I said, but didn't say I said. Said it? Sure I said It. Or I wouldn't have thought I said what I think I thought I said. Well said!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Right, you said!
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'nough said.
Comment from Aussie
Twin minds are so linked, they know each other like they know themselves. One starts a conversation and the other finishes it. I think they are so linked, they don't need to speak out loud sometimes. Joined at the hip. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Twin minds are so linked, they know each other like they know themselves. One starts a conversation and the other finishes it. I think they are so linked, they don't need to speak out loud sometimes. Joined at the hip. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thank you much.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I understand your short poem, JLR. Twins do often finish each other's sentences/thought, speak at the same time with the same words, or can be separated by miles and still have this happen. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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I understand your short poem, JLR. Twins do often finish each other's sentences/thought, speak at the same time with the same words, or can be separated by miles and still have this happen. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 20-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thank you, I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Patty Palmer
Gave you 5 stars just for being a twin! But, ya lost me at he said she said - she said he said I'm quite confused at the moment!'
"Keep right on writing!"
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Gave you 5 stars just for being a twin! But, ya lost me at he said she said - she said he said I'm quite confused at the moment!'
"Keep right on writing!"
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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And the beat goes on, thank you for your input.
Comment from moongirlwriter
OMGsh. . .this is so true. Sure hope this poem didn't need to rhyme. :)
I also think you did well in chosing this artwork, it goes perfectly. Very cute and best of luck with this piece in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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OMGsh. . .this is so true. Sure hope this poem didn't need to rhyme. :)
I also think you did well in chosing this artwork, it goes perfectly. Very cute and best of luck with this piece in the contest. :)
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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Thank you, a little mono rhyme done without fear, thank You, because my twin was so dear, before God took her from here.
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:)
Comment from Neonewman
LOL! Not a twin here, but my great nephews are mirror twins. What a fun ride they have been. They're 8 now and these boys are non stop laughter and trouble lol.
God bless
Steve
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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LOL! Not a twin here, but my great nephews are mirror twins. What a fun ride they have been. They're 8 now and these boys are non stop laughter and trouble lol.
God bless
Steve
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2019
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You love them to the end of time, twins are so very special in and of themselves. thank you for sharing.
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True, my pleasure
