Comment from Sasha

Exceptional

This is one of the best flash fictions I have read. You did a terrific job with this one. Thank you so much for sharing this gem with us. I have never tried flash fiction but I feel it is something I should try.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019

Wow, Sasha. Thank you so very much for this wonderful recognition. You should try it. It's fun to do, but not easy. Thanks so much again. I'm thrilled. All best. Ulla:)))

reply by Sasha on 07-Apr-2019

I dowant to try one but not sure of the when.

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019

I'll be looking forward to the 'when' :)))

reply by Sasha on 07-Apr-2019

I may just write one and post it. I don't much care for contests.

reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019

Great idea, Sasha. Go for it and let me know. :)))

Comment from JudyE

Excellent

Oh dear. I just hope it wasn't his sister getting out of the car! You've set the scene well here with the pregnant woman waiting in anticipation. Good luck.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019

Haha, Judy, no that would have been tough luck. But for some reason I don't think it was his sister. Thanks a lot for a great review. All best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Wow! Short and definitely NOT SWEET! Hehe! Wish you well in the contest. I know I have to write more but no spags either, so there. Will see what your other offering is.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019

Hi Geoff and Louise, thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. I've just posted the next chapter to The Fisherman's Son. I hope to read something from you as well. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Mistydawn

Exceptional

Wow, what a story a journey you took me on. First starting out so happy, gleeful lovers reunite switching to a murder at the end. I didn't see that ending coming that's for sure. Very well done.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019

Wow, Misty, Thank you so much. I'm so happy with this recognition. All best Ulla:)))

Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi Ulla,

Ooooooh, this is a super flash fiction write and an excellent contest entry. Very well written, with nothing to revise.

What a surprise ending!

Thanks for sharing.

Jan

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2019

Thanks so much, Jan, and your wonderful review.I'm so glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Oh my!!! I would say she may have killed him or maybe her. HMmm. I guess we'll never know. LOL I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Question and I honestly don't know the answer. Are you disqualified because your 2 words over. I sure hope not. Good luck.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

Thank a lot Barbara. I'm glad you liked the story.Oh, she killed him alright.
I shouldn't be. The contest says it can be between 98-102 words. So I should be okay. I tried to make it a 100 words but it was impossible. Thanks again. All best. Ulla:)))

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Yikes! I hope this was an innocent homecoming. It might have been good to wait and see who 'she' was. Good story and told in so few words.

Beautiful artwork.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

Hi Yvonne, thank you so much. It's implied in the 'shapely legs' that she's everything but innocent. Wery difficult to say it all in just a 102 words. Thanks so much again. All best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Sandra Montanino

Excellent

Wow! That came out of nowhere. Very powerful. The only line I really didn't get was the dark hair that came out of nowhere. Just his hair? I also liked the way it started out rather peacefully and then in a flash, there's a murder. Good job!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

Thanks a lot Sandra. I'm glad you liked it. Well,she sees the dark hair and knows it's him getting out of the car. I only had 100 words to play with. Thanks so much again. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hi Ulla, That took a sharp turn! I wasn't expecting that at all! I was hoping maybe he brought her an interior designer for the nursery or something like that... let's hope he didn't! :-0

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 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

Thanks a lot, Susan. Well, he brought someone totally different. didn't he? All best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

Ah! So now you've entered it. I thought I hadn't seen the blue letters below.
The new artwork is cool, and, as I told you, I like the story.

Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 06-Apr-2019

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2019

Thanks a lot, Maria Jose. Don't know what happened. But here it is. Thanks again. Ulla:)))