St Louis
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "St. Louis Chapter 2 part 2"Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?
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Comment from rheabug
Barbara, this is a wonderful post of another chapter. Thank you for sharing. I like the way this is going. Keep on with your creative pen. HUGS
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Barbara, this is a wonderful post of another chapter. Thank you for sharing. I like the way this is going. Keep on with your creative pen. HUGS
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Shirley McLain
Nice chapter, that I enjoyed reading. Your female character is a bit of a snit. I like that because it kept the story interesting and moving forward. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Have a great Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Nice chapter, that I enjoyed reading. Your female character is a bit of a snit. I like that because it kept the story interesting and moving forward. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Have a great Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the kind review. Mac will soften a little, but not too much.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, so she can't really remember a heck of a lot. I wonder where they're going to take it from here.
McKenzie accepted small pad of paper and a pen from Logan and grinned. = McKenzie accepted a small pad of paper ...
I'm looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Hi Barbara, so she can't really remember a heck of a lot. I wonder where they're going to take it from here.
McKenzie accepted small pad of paper and a pen from Logan and grinned. = McKenzie accepted a small pad of paper ...
I'm looking forward to reading on. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the catch. I have made the correction. I noticed another mistake while fixing that one. LOL
Comment from seaglass
The narrative takes us through the continuation of this budding friendship. The introduction of the mystery man and his tattoo provides new interest that will be a major clue. I'm sure the snake and scorpion are a symbol that will be part of the story. The characters are likeable and believable.
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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The narrative takes us through the continuation of this budding friendship. The introduction of the mystery man and his tattoo provides new interest that will be a major clue. I'm sure the snake and scorpion are a symbol that will be part of the story. The characters are likeable and believable.
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from susand3022
Hi Barbara, Somebody got herself into a little bit of a pickle the night before now didn't she! Looks like I'm going to have to go back to the beginning and catch this one up!
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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Hi Barbara, Somebody got herself into a little bit of a pickle the night before now didn't she! Looks like I'm going to have to go back to the beginning and catch this one up!
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2019
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She sure did, but it wasn't her fault. Thank you for the kind review.
